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So basically, this is the "dark" mirror? Showing dark alternate versions of Equestria worlds that are evil, corrupt, and mess up concepts.
And more specifically, this mirror is linked to a certain dark perversion of MLP Fall of Equestria/"Caribou sex land".
Where, why, and how did it even get here on Equestria Girl's Earth!?
Oh sure, walk into the ominous portal to a dark world. And WITHOUT telling anybody or warn them about this!!??
She didn't learn that "curiosity KILLS that cat" lesson?
You have a good point. But, I seen some Fics where they turn a new leaf. Still, I do agree that it ain't your fault when THEY are the ones that refuse your offer to be redeemed and be friends.
You are in Anthro heaven variant of a alternate Equestria World.
Or was a "heaven".
How come their is clean air to breath in?
So, this type of FOE ( Fall of Equestria ) world, is a extremely dark ending version; Where everybody/everypony dies!? And this is a Fallout/Mad Max 2.0, but nobody is here, except one.
Damn! Guess this world didn't either have a Displaced/Crossover/Human Military Domination Fantasy/OP Human or Alien in Equestria "Insurance", am I right?
This is just a regular Fall of Equestria with no happy ending in sight, then wasteland.
Edit: I seen the negative thumb downs. Why?
Is it because I talk or comment too much? What's wrong with that?
Is this Pre-Alicorn Twilight timeline or Pre-Season Four finale with Tirek?
Dang, that's sad.
Although, you can still breath in here!? What is with terrible fictional wastelands, but still has breathable atmospheres? I watch Wall-E and 9 ( 2009 Movie ), okay.
Righteo, it's Anthro.
One word: Caribou.
You should be grateful that the Caribou ( More specifically, the female-hating/misogynistic and rapist versions from Fall of Equestria verse. ) aren't a canon species.
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This takes place during season 6 where the crystal heart is revealed to be a weather protector
and after mlp movie
Did they all get "Thanos snapped but everybody gets it", literally!?
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nope
Yep, this is definitely Pre-Tirek. And hearing the concept of a crystal cock the first time I read a FOE fic, is really laughable.
Yep, the evil king bastard himself. A lot of readers in here wants his brutalized and bloody head, including me.
Pfft! Tell to the original Fall of Equestria series, or any other ones.
And the main "excuse" on why they "win". Is with extreme sexual mind control on the stallions to join them and rape the mares themselves, or forced the mares to be too horny to fight back.
P.S. And the mere mention of the royal guard or "army" is laughable. They're worse than even the Stormtroopers from Star Wars or Red Shirts from Star Trek as cannon fodder. At least they show up and FOUGHT "decently". While the pony guard/army either didn't show up, and let the Mane Six deal with it. Or they run around like headless chickens, or easily get kicked away by the main baddies.
You don't want know.
All you want to know is that they want to tune the entire world into their "sex fantasy land".
This is probably inspired by Kuroinu in the first place.
That original concept of cutting their horns and un-feathered the wings really didn't sit right with me, or anybody else. Although, the "tame verison" from other inspired writers are horn magic restricted rings, and "wing cuffs" you know.
*After finishing this chapter*;
Well crap, Dainn is Once-ler!? Great!
Typical and naive Twilight. Still, he did deserves this torment of being alone on this wasteland of his very own creation.
Huh? Maybe you are not so naive. You are rightly pissed.
I hate to say it, he has a point. Again, curiosity kills the cat here.
Touche.
At least they didn't get "Thanos snapped".
"Luckily" for them, their are some good Caribou that didn't agree with this rapist tom foolery. Especially the true definition of husbands/fathers/grandpas/uncles/brothers/sons/nephews of Caribou that didn't treat their doe's ( Female Caribou ), or ponies and other non-pony females like sexual property. Or just heavily mind controlled against their wills.
Seen this happen from other FOE stories that doesn't want the Caribou to be pure evil, misogyny, and rapist 100%.
King Dainn, his many sons, and his many loyal Caribou Followers and Stallian ( Even Mare ) Traitors that are to fully blame.
It's seems like a immortal curse ( But not with eternal youth ) by Fault herself. Poetic and fitting karma to be alone for eternity.
Long, Long Time Ago. From a Galaxy Far, Far Away......... And Shrek: FAR, far, Away vibes.
So, after finishing this chapter. Seeing a version of Dainn that actually feels remorse and guilt of what he has done?
https://giphy.com/gifs/RoadshowPBS-antiques-roadshow-best-moments-3ksOzzbbI3vC7HhRdv
Can I please get a link?
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No you can't. He's dead
If there's any justice, Twilight will chain him to a rock in the open, and leave. Immortality is bad. Unmoving immortality is worse. I think that's what he deserves as the god and avatar of the Caribou. He is a monument to their sins, and unworthy of redemption.
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Really?
I try to be the bigger man, but he's sufficiently abstract on the other side of the internet. I'm going to get plastered on Guinness and black shandys and dance on a replica of his grave. I'm genuinely happy in the middle of a low period.
The only Caribou story I find interesting, for an oddly specific reason. You killed the other servitor races. At least they were allowed that.
I hope The Dead One, The Stag King, The Idiot-God doesn't die. I hope that lonely Anthony Freedmont is stuck under a rock in the end. And I hope he has All The Time In The World.
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Ignorance without thought is not a good thing. From what I have read from the story you're just going to follow the same route as the caribou. In fullest list thought process you'll probably call it justice, not able to think it's this another form of ignorance.
But anyway this is a pretty good story only problem I can see about it is you're giving away too much of the plot. I can pretty much guess what happened and what the next steps of the story are going to be. Maybe try dropping information into pieces a little bit of here a little bit of there.
I can't explain why but the end instantly filled my head with "Hell's Comin' With Me" by Poor Man's Poison. I am the righteous hand of god, I am the devil that you forgot.
Or maybe a little bit like "Six trillion years and overnight story." But that's a little too positive by the end.
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Not really. There's literally no one left but a standard cursed immortal, and he's so bad that turning into an All The Time In The World wretch seems right. Sorry, I'm opposed to notions of eternal forgiveness. I don't buy the concept of universal salvation. Past a certain point, no matter how contrite... you bought the ability to grow old by sucking the life out of others. There's a reason people wrote "We have fed you all for a thousand years." That was our doom, you know. From the days when you chained us in your fields to the strike of a week ago. The Dead One had all power at one point. And acted like all gods, like Yahweh, failing the problem of evil spectacularly. He's an omnicidal god, and any punishment he gets can never suffice. He's one of a vanishingly small number of figures that might actually deserve something like a Hell.
Great Chapter, I will be waiting more
Dainn . I hate that guy.
now this interesting
I think this is why I feel the fad of redeeming villains has gone too far. Because not all sides need to be looked at. Neutrality is toxic even in scholars. I can't recall the exact quote but Archbishop Desmond Tutu said that if an elephant stands on the tail of a mouse and you are neutral the mouse will not appreciate your neutrality. Villains don't need to be redeemed, understood, or listened to. They need the guillotine. Even this "all the time in the world" needs suffering, containment under a mountain of mountains, in the depths of the sea, on a neutron star of a planet falling into a black hole.
Redeemed villains are an insult to the victims, saying they were just set dressing for someone else's story. Redemption is untenable because it assumes someone is a universal protagonist, chosen of god, divinely right. We expelled nobility, we should have offed their heads all over the world. No nobles, no entitled assholes like Dainn who get to live while other die for him. He's the ultimate Karen. Entitled. Feeling worthy of leaning lessons with the blood of others writing the text book. If others can die to educate him, he should die just as easily to educate some random person. If redemption is real, villains can die to redeem their killers.
Ni caribous ni rois ni auteurs qui écrivent sur l'un ou l'autre.
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Every brony hates Dainn. He is basically the most hated (with a capital H) OC in the brony community.
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That he is. Plus, leave the zebras out of this because Zecora was one of them and she's a good kind of zebra along with her people where she comes from before she moved to Ponyville in the Everfree Forest.
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Also, Dainn is the sworn enemy of all ponies, especially the anthro mares.
I feel like this story is inspired by my comic commission I made palcomix do. Also I'm interested in a foe commission as well
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what was the name of this comic?
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Sex Re-education
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I read that one
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Did you like my story
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I did. Sombra stole Dainn's name. Sombra must have betrayed Dainn and left him for dead
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The artist didn't want to use the oc
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So you started with "there's way too many villain redemption stories" to "actually, ALL redemption stories are inherently evil!"
While these aren't TECHNICALLY contradictory points (after all, if you believe that redemption arcs should simply never be written, then one being written is "too many" ), the first tends to come with the implication that whatever there is "too many of" has the right to exist but just in a reduced quantity. Which implies that redemption stories are NOT inherently evil. So which is it, man: are redemption stories inherently evil, or are there simply too many?
Why didn't you answer my question? Or did those other two guys answer it for me? And how do they know he's dead?
NCN hasn't replied to anything nor went online. besides, FOE started in 2013. TO answer your question, NCN is dead online
"I am smol bean, love me. I am forgivable ickle bean, UWU ickle baby." Like... a boss can't be in a relationship with a subordinate. And a god is always just an autocrat that cannot feel emotions like others, being untethered and apart from common concerns. Corrupt or not, Dainn enjoyed his advantages. He was a Third Man assassin. "Look at all those little dots down there. Suppose I were to offer you ten-thousand dollars for every dot that stopped moving forever. Would you really tell me to keep my money? Or... would you start calculating how many dots you could afford?" His love is a farce, the love of a genocidal god, a dot-buyer. That's a pretty cheap MacGuffin, since it's painfully contrived and meant to drive reader sympathies in artificial and unwarranted ways. I've gone from Catholic to atheist, I learned how to separate feel-good dictator happy-talk from what it's trying to cover. The literary tricks won't work on me, I've rubbished more popular gods than this asshole caribou.
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Every brony HATES dainn, literally, and always believes he is not worthy of redemption. You are not the only one.
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It is as forrest yuchnitz said:
His comment for the life and times of a deposed king
The caribou bastard king doesn't deserve love or a second chance he deserves to have his head put on a pike outside the castle
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I agree with you. Let's throw him to Helheim because...he's a Viking caribou after all and burned him alive there.
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The EQ Girl one?
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yes