What if there was a crossover between a horror movie franchise and a kids show. One hell of an epic battle if you ask me. The slasher vs the main 6 and the Princesses.
The title is much, much, better, though this is going down in quality from the last chapter. For starters, there seemed to be so much dialog, with so little narration, descriptions, etc. that it seemed more like they were in a chat room, rather than in a place, with things, and, stuff, and stuff. Second, you might want to run through it again for grammar and spelling. Third, there were quite a few places where stuff was just thrown out there, luckily a fair portion of the things were mentioned in the previous chapter, but some of the things seemed to just come out of the blue. Forth, this chapter seemed less like a chapter, and more like a Q and A forum to answer some questions that the readers may have. It just doesn't flow well like this. Now it isn't anywhere near the worst I have ever seen, but it is fairly bad. Oh, I am sorry for being a little late with this comment, I get caught up in things so easily.
8036576 Oh hush, I'm not wise. I just know how to talk to make it sound like I am wise. Anyways, hope you have a good day, I guess. I really just don't have anything to say. Even though I just said something, so that is a contradictory statement, so I guess I really do have something to say even if it is saying that I have nothing to say. I should stop before I start rambling again...
One Two Jason's Coming for you Three Four He will break your doors Five Six he can't die Seven eight he is in a very bad state Nine ten you will never live again
The title is much, much, better, though this is going down in quality from the last chapter. For starters, there seemed to be so much dialog, with so little narration, descriptions, etc. that it seemed more like they were in a chat room, rather than in a place, with things, and, stuff, and stuff. Second, you might want to run through it again for grammar and spelling. Third, there were quite a few places where stuff was just thrown out there, luckily a fair portion of the things were mentioned in the previous chapter, but some of the things seemed to just come out of the blue. Forth, this chapter seemed less like a chapter, and more like a Q and A forum to answer some questions that the readers may have. It just doesn't flow well like this. Now it isn't anywhere near the worst I have ever seen, but it is fairly bad. Oh, I am sorry for being a little late with this comment, I get caught up in things so easily.
8036330 Well thank you again for your wisdom
8036576 Oh hush, I'm not wise. I just know how to talk to make it sound like I am wise. Anyways, hope you have a good day, I guess. I really just don't have anything to say. Even though I just said something, so that is a contradictory statement, so I guess I really do have something to say even if it is saying that I have nothing to say. I should stop before I start rambling again...
8085480 Yes it is the name of the book.
Brah be honest...is this a ash vs evil/jason story
If it is then YES!!
8085538 Sorry but no. But know I have an idea for what my next story could be.
8085574 glad to be assistance...now where did put my pick axe?
Keep going the good work! Its getting very good!!
8088883 Thank You
One two freddys coming for you Jason version
One Two Jason's Coming for you
Three Four He will break your doors
Five Six he can't die
Seven eight he is in a very bad state
Nine ten you will never live again
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I like it. Nice work.
Nice, just remember to use commas and you'll be fine.