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LoveLoss


For poneography, seriously, why did no one ever think of this?

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Her kind wasn’t allowed to orgasm

...why not?

Would she still lose her mind to lust and become a monster that raped everything in sight?

Methinks there be propaganda afoot.

“Miss Scratch, you know that you aren’t allowed to orgasm, no matter how much you beg.”

Yes, because consistently blue balling them is the best way to lower rapes.

The technician seemed to take great pleasure in tormenting the helpless unicorn, using Vinyl’s own lust and sexuality to punish and torture her.

They really need some security. Honestly, her ass should be fired for this, not that it will be.

7889414 Now you're asking the right questions. :trollestia:

The next chapter(s) will hold the answers, and more. I was mostly seeing if my ability to write is suitable before I dive into the rest of it.

7889484 Boo?

Elaborate for me to fix in future?

7889493 Sorry, did not read correctly, part of the whole new thing.

Please ignore.

7889493 No, the author and I share no affiliation.

I honestly can't imagine Celestia being okay with this. It's so out of character as to be kind of painful, hopefully we'll get an explanation for that further down the line.

7896661 I completely agree with you. Celestia needs to be involved in helping Vinyl and Octavia.

There are so many questions that you raise yet fail to answer. It's mind boggling.

You know why not have a pony make a Herm Bomb and set it off in Cloudsdale where the effects will then spread over ALL of equestria due to the weather, that way Vinyl and Octavia would have to be freed from those items since everypony would be a Herm then.

How Kafkaesque and dystopian... Perhaps a bit much. Though it's labeled as incomplete, so Vinyl and Octavia could somehow turn their situation around if there are more chapters later. Or there could be an alt ending where they escape or something if Octavia notices the police on the way and does something

Is this story dead in the water?

UPDATE! WE NEED TO SEE CELESTIA HURTING VYNIL AND OCTAVIA'S CAPTORS!

This story dead? It actually was pretty good

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