Equestria, a magical land of talking ponies with various abilities and colors, and the humans that live amonst them thanks to the portals that have formed between their two worlds.
Vinyl Scratch has finally come to a decision. Not about her career, her music, or the mare she loves, but about her turbulent past. Alongside Octavia Piano, Vinyl has chosen to face the only ponies she never wanted to see again. Their parents.
My unicorn parents called me a worthless mud pony. They pushed me every day to overcome my lowly status. When I woke up one morning with my cutie mark, I thought they would love me. I couldn't have been farther from the truth.
I honestly can't imagine Celestia being okay with this. It's so out of character as to be kind of painful, hopefully we'll get an explanation for that further down the line.
You know why not have a pony make a Herm Bomb and set it off in Cloudsdale where the effects will then spread over ALL of equestria due to the weather, that way Vinyl and Octavia would have to be freed from those items since everypony would be a Herm then.
How Kafkaesque and dystopian... Perhaps a bit much. Though it's labeled as incomplete, so Vinyl and Octavia could somehow turn their situation around if there are more chapters later. Or there could be an alt ending where they escape or something if Octavia notices the police on the way and does something
...why not?
Methinks there be propaganda afoot.
Yes, because consistently blue balling them is the best way to lower rapes.
They really need some security. Honestly, her ass should be fired for this, not that it will be.
7889414 Now you're asking the right questions.
The next chapter(s) will hold the answers, and more. I was mostly seeing if my ability to write is suitable before I dive into the rest of it.
7889414 Boo.
7889484 Boo?
Elaborate for me to fix in future?
7889488 Are you star glitter?
7889493 Sorry, did not read correctly, part of the whole new thing.
Please ignore.
7889506 Oh sorry to be so snippy.
7889493 No, the author and I share no affiliation.
I honestly can't imagine Celestia being okay with this. It's so out of character as to be kind of painful, hopefully we'll get an explanation for that further down the line.
7896661 I completely agree with you. Celestia needs to be involved in helping Vinyl and Octavia.
There are so many questions that you raise yet fail to answer. It's mind boggling.
You know why not have a pony make a Herm Bomb and set it off in Cloudsdale where the effects will then spread over ALL of equestria due to the weather, that way Vinyl and Octavia would have to be freed from those items since everypony would be a Herm then.
How Kafkaesque and dystopian... Perhaps a bit much. Though it's labeled as incomplete, so Vinyl and Octavia could somehow turn their situation around if there are more chapters later. Or there could be an alt ending where they escape or something if Octavia notices the police on the way and does something
Is this story dead in the water?
UPDATE! WE NEED TO SEE CELESTIA HURTING VYNIL AND OCTAVIA'S CAPTORS!
This story dead? It actually was pretty good