When one ends up dying in battle, one expects to move onto the afterlife. Not for me though, for I ended up as a filly, being taken in by the ruling family. Now this sounds all nice and dandy, but there is one major problem, I wasn't the first one to be taken in, and the prick who's going to be my cousin turns out to be in a similar boat as me, except that he and I belong to separate organizations that can't stand each other. Well, at least this will be an interesting foalhood.
This is a collab story, with its partner story, Time Problems with the Sun, being written by AandWguy.
Nice start to the story. Looks like Nebula will be in for a wonderful time at the castle
I look forward to reading more.
withers
Extra period
albiet
There a word missing here or something?
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supposed
royalty
Looking forward to the next chapter
Intriguing...
Ahhhhh............nope still dont get it
Good job keep it up see you next chapter
Good job I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Great beginning
I do not know but I started to laugh
And it is one of the few stories that caught my eyes
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Oh, okay.
I was expecting the "foals" to be much younger--both to be more like Stewie from Family Guy...where all the adults could only hear them babbling baby-talk, yet the "foals" they could understand all the adults and each other, thus the source of their conflict....
Still, I'll keep an eye on these to see where this goes.
Off to an interesting start.
Lauren Faust? Whattttt?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Fausticorn ?
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Added one detail, and BUAHAHAHAHAHA! How did I miss that! BUAHAHAHAHAHA!
LOL Interesting story so far
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oh , the detail...
R63 Fausticorn
7897553 Sometimes you don't notice till it's to late
Such a lovely conversation to have during a meal
Hilarious, can't wait for the next chapter
I like this story. However, some typo's and misspellings were really distracting. Here's a list with corrections:
who hate our guts
Nebula, meet your soon-to-be-cousin
I see you're already planning on adopting
OR
I see you've already planned to adopt
in a deadpan tone
for today is yet another glorious night!
While I'm glad that you are happy
Then why, pray tell, were you asserting
with a concerned look on her face
Good thing I said challenge accepted
you want a battle for dominance between
per se
so much effort that I
I hope you don't mind me pointing them out like this. I look forward to the next chapter :)
So does this take place in the first season? That would be neat
Also, oh dear... Don't fall asleep or the Pinkie will get yea!
im DEFINATELY getting an Aether vibe from Nebula.
for those who don't know who Aether is, read Distorted Fate and its sequels.
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So it makes it very humorous when the character has that type of abrasive personality and they interact with the peaceful and naive ponies.
Lllllllllllovinggggggggg it
As a Pokemon player, the urge to meme the hell out of this is strong.
If this is anything like athears humor canterlot is in trouble
7909540 Aether is cruel, which Nebula isn't.
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Good job as always can't wait to see the next chapter
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Hmm, why do I get a feeling of a Green Eggs and Ham parody popping up with those two?
For some reason, I have a foreshadowing of chairs and tasers becoming a theme in these stories ♪♫
LoL this was another fantastic chapter, well done
7909555 well canterlot is less screwed then I was hoping
7912315 Nah, you're just imagining Aether bashing out every noble that irks her, which is 85% or so of them. For Nebula, you'll find out in time.
7912319 I guess I'll just have to put a tracker on your story then
It will be a good contest between Nebula and Pinkie. Pinkie does have the experience needed. After all, she got her sister to smile...as you can see here:
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Is AandWguy also the AnY Pony?
7915232 No. I'm not. Just a writer on this site.
Hmmm....
Luna's going to have Nebula taught how to use her magic...
Does this mean we're finally get to see Twilight's feared "Magic Kindergarten"?
This chapter was fun to read, I love it
Keep up the good work
Hmm... I wonder if it well be one of the Mane 6 or someone else. I'm thinking a foal like a filly or colt or... Trixie!
This was an interesting chapter, well done
I'm looking forward to who Nebula's retainer might be
7922518 My mind immediately went to the hilarity of Time Turner showing up. Get a time-based pony as a retainer while being annoyed at the other time pony.
7922822 I was thinking of that to! The first thought was the Doctor because it would make so much sense but I was a bit afraid that the main character and him would be to much a like in the story.
Other than the slight/few typos every now and then, i find this fic very entertaining. Hoping to see more of this ^-^
7922518 I doubt it's one of the main 6, they have jobs and responsibilities
I see the conflicting responsibilities problem has been fixed
An element of loyalty and element of laughter the two ponies who show a lot of fun
Oh good choices! I was surprised that Rainbow actually punch a foal to get the job... Go Rainbow
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7933669 Yeah seriously, get in the ******* bag Nebby!