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This story takes place after the changeling invasion of Canterlot. Princess Celestia has ordered an investigation into the mystery of how the changeling queen was able to enter Canterlot and masquerade as Princess Cadence. Chief Special Investigator Moonshroud believes he has found the one pony that holds the key in solving the mystery.

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No characters tagged?
Not even OC?:pinkiegasp:

856153 Invisible Ninja Pony strikes again! As for the story, it seems interesting.

Nice and very interesting story.

I never actually thought that I would ever be "that guy", but I figure I might as well...

"I was at the Gala," said Moonshroud. "Things didn't went according to your plan."

"It did went according to plan," said Greenvine.

In both cases, went can be replaced with go. Other than that, nice work, keep it up!

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Ooops. I guess I was so eager to have my first MLP fanfiction up that I missed a few things. Thanks anyway.

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Pretty good for your first fic, hope to see more!

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Thanks. Maybe it's beginner's luck.

How sad. Yet, sometimes trying to get someone to notice you is like trying to talk to a brick wall.

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