Sweetie Belle has just graduated high school and is headed to college in Cantrlot. While her two best friends have different plans, one of her classmates is headed to the same college, so she won't be all alone.
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Pretty good start. Apart from some minor quibbles* I don't see any serious problems.
Don't worry, Davenport ought to be able to get by just fine on Twilight's weekly quill order.
* a. Footnotes should be marked at the end of the word or phrase that is denoted.
b. Footnotes should be used for items of tangential interest and should be able to be ignored without affecting the reading of the main passage (i.e. Information you deem necessary for clear readability should not be in a footnote.)
c.1. The information in your footnotes wasn't really necessary (you wouldn't expect a reader to be confused when you refer to a character by their first name), and
c.2. If your writing were actually so opaque that you need to give readers notes about how to understand it, the proper fix is to rewrite it to make it more clear, not to give your readers a translation guide.
You mean like George Foreman grills and Sham-Wow? That last one LITERALLY has the word sham in its name!
*coughs*
*people look towards me*
"What? Did you want me to say something?"
*they turn back*
*coughs again*
"SPOILERS!"
Probably not too thrilled about it.
Old-Fashioned to the end....
Of course not!
Exactly!
Still the same old Diamond...sort of.