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Princess Twilight Sparkle listened to the lectures of her senior princesses and has lived the life of Canterlot's high society since the day she ascended as a young filly. Unfortunately, she skipped Cadence's lessons on love.
Specifically, how to confess to the mare of her dreams when she so happened to be her stunningly beautiful mare-in-waiting.
"Help. Please."
Preread by Timaeus and Monochromatic.
Artwork by Rossby Waves.
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This chapter was a delight to read this early in Google Docs.
Well that was shithouse.
it was actually hella dorbz. dont h8 was only joking
*squeals with delight* This was such an adorable story!
You should expaned with this verse. A prequel perhaps? But this was a good story.
w h a t
I think our resident Patron Saint of RariTwi might have a rival. I like AU tangents where things are similar enough to recognize, but different enough to keep me on my toes. Well done.
7889062
YES I CAN FINALLY RETIRE
Here you go zommy, the official RariTwi crown, now excuse me while I move to RariLestia land.
7889472 WAIT! NO! GET BACK HERE!
7889474
Now, Zommy, you have written a wonderful RariTwi AU, which is the iniciation test for all new RariTwi overlords.
Characterization was perfect, prose was very good, and it got ten out of ten squees from me, as you know by how much I gushed over it on Discord.
You will make a fitting ruler of the RariTwi ship, while I go off and explore new lands. Godspeed, my child, godspeed.
7889485 Excuse you, I do not accept this crown. Also, I'm pretty sure I'm older than you.
7889497
Well, I'm not taking it back xc
7889517 *spitslimes the ship to your hooves* Too bad. You just got it back.
Well done, Pacer.
This is one of those "my face hurts from smiling" sort of stories.
7888688 Hmm?
This. This was cute as a litter of swarming, happy golden retriever puppies. With little hats!
Although, 7889517, you don't get to give your crown away. Not until you finish The Enchanted Library, at the very least. If you could toss some more of earthsong's twiguard stories too,I wouldn't be against it
But after that, yeah, the one currently known as carapace is indeed a nice candidate for the new RariTwi overlord!
7891550 I DEMAND SEQUEL!
7889472
You say retire but we all know you can't help yourself. The itch will return.
I can't help but crave a lot more, but what there is was quite delightful.
That was adorable.
A very excellent and well written story! I enjoyed it thoroughly.
I always love RariTwi stories. This was a good one.