Epilogue
Princess Twilight paced back and forth, not sure what to do. The portal wasn’t working and she hadn’t been able to get a hold of either Cadance or Shining Armor. “Twilight, calm down, you’re going to leave a mark on the floor,” Spike said.
“But I can’t calm down,” Twilight said. “How did the Tantabus get out? How did it even get out of the dreamscape? Sunset and the others have to fight it alone and I can’t do anything about it!”
“Well, I did find a few books that could help us reestablish a connection,” Starlight offered.
“I don’t think it’ll work, the Tantabus most likely destroyed the portal completely and even if it could be fixed on that side it would take time, and that’s even with Equestrian magic.” Twilight sighed. “Some help I was…”
Starlight and Spike glanced at one another but then Spike noticed something behind her. “Uh…Twilight?”
“Well, I can still send Sunset messages so at the very least I can send instructions if need be, if she was able to defeat the Tantabus,” Twilight said. “But then again, she looked pretty powerful…”
“Twilight,” Starlight said.
“Oh I can’t be doubting them. Sunset and other me already took care of two she-demons already so I think they’re more than capable of-”
“TWILIGHT!”
“What!?” Both Spike and Starlight pointed behind her and Twilight turned around. The portal appeared to be operational again and a pony was currently standing in front of it.
“Hey Twilight,” Sunset said with a smile. “I think I better get you caught up to speed…”
I can't believe this will be the first story on here I actually finished. For the longest time, I would come up with an idea and after a short time I would lose interest in it. But I finally learned that I should keep my stories simple and not too overly complicated (or horribly long for that matter). I thank everyone that has supported this story and given it a chance. This won't be the last you see of the Shadowbolts, I promise you that and as for that "duel" well...something will be coming up in the future. 
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I thought that the Crystal Heart would be the key in the end as would the Crystal Prep girls. I wouldn't be at all surprised if they are its Chosen Protectors of some sort.
With regard to Radiant Hope, I'm not dropping my suspicion of her entirely at this point. She may not be a black hat but I suspect that she has her own agenda. Maybe not a malign one but an agenda in any case and one that might ultimately lead her down an ill-advised path.
As for the Shadowbolts? Well, Destiny has come calling and I doubt that they will ever be able to escape its grasp. Once you are a Guardian of Harmony, it is an identity that will be with you forever.
Not bad,
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Good story overall, well done.
The thing with the Shadowbolts was a big odd. Though it was rather cool.
Although I am curious as to where this story is heading next
This was a great story!
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Pleeeeaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee????????????????????
Edit: Oh... A sequel was posted yesterday...
That was so good!!!
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Humorous inversion of Friendship Game's ending. I like it.
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And yet in Ocarina of Time, Link can pick up stone spires that are like...12x his size? Is that ridiculous too?
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Applejack I might be able to believe, but Rainbow's speed doesn't come with enhanced strength. Unless she hit the Ursa Major at near-sonic speed, she wouldn't be able to budge it, and if she did hit it at that kind of speed, she'd break every bone in her body.
Physics and magic powers aside, I did enjoy this story. There's definitely room for improvement in the writing department, but you delivered a solidly entertaining piece of literature. Was it cliché at times? Definitely. Was it fun to read? Absolutely. 7/10
Silly Twilight things like dimesnhional rips and elemental powers don't just go away when the focusing artifact is destroyed. Heck episode 1 proved destroying the physical elements was at most a short term measure. All the portal needed to reform was a suitable flat surface to connect to. I doubt Starswril meant it to attach to the statue base, it was just the closest suitableble flat surface when the portal opened in the human world.