This is an M/M shipping, if you don't like that then move along, but if you do then enjoy.
A stowaway zebra named Zecarius has been banished and shamed from his home country for liking stallions. He traveled to Equestria to escape these tramatizimg experiences.
Will he find something better in this new land?
Curly Note, a humble resident in ponyville is always looking for new adventures and will always look out for a friend. From unlikely circumstances he meets a zebra, saying he escaped trechary and hate from his family and friends. What will Curly Note do to help this mysterious zebra?
Chapters (11)
Welp, this story surely wasn't perfect, but it wasn't all that bad either! The characters were likeable and had some nicely implemented backstory, but I really didn't like Sailient, too 'gangsta' for meh, brah. The romance felt a little bit rushed too, but that's basically all. The rest of my complaints are about grammar and confusing formatting (nothing a pre-reader can't fix).
Overall, it was a nice story, but it could still use some work. Hope you improve in the future, because I see a potential!
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Well any constructive criticism is much appreciated. As for Salient, she is based of my good friend but totally exaggerated. Much of the story was quickly rushed because i was on a busy schedule. But thank you for looking at it.
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So adorable ^3^