First person; a lonely man meets seven young women he'll never forget.
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Yes sensei.
This turn south right away... I expected some high action shit
7957631 what what there's two girls about to fight you can still salvage something
Aww yea, time for a training montage!
Hah, I almost laughed out loud at the end of the chapter. Very good execution, and yes, no better way to get used to your immortality than beating the everliving shit out of another immortal.
Not to mention I never really thought that deeply about the consequences of being immortal in this kind of age: technology is always rapidly advancing, so even if you couldn't die, people would still find a way to render you helpless without trying to hurt you at all. Golds' initiative in making sure Rarity and Fluttershy know how to fight his way is definitely a smart and necessary move.
Honestly. He is ridiculously OP.
Doesn't need food, sleep, or even air to stay conscious and is crazy strong with invulnerability. He has the right to fight however he wants but I think the next step to teach them after learning to not flinch is to learn how to dodge. Best way to not bring attention to yourself is to not have a string of fights behind you where people say they fought someone that took a blow that should have hurt them but didn't. Honestly do tasers even effect him? That is the last thing I can think of since tranquilizers wouldn't since he can't be cut and has immunity to poisons (alcohol).
Still despite him being superman without flight and lazer eyes I am enjoying the story so very good work. It isn't often I come across a story with an OP main character and I like it.
I just have 1 thing to say: do not DOOOOOOOOGE!!!!!
Clever mindset. Flinching will lead to mistakes in the heat of the moment.
ME: Can u come out to Flutters'? I wanted to talk to u too about something.
Isn't it supposed to be two instead of too or did you mean it as "I wanted to u (as well) about something"