Opal and Rarity have always had a close bond, even if at times it hasn't seemed like that's the case. Both rely on each other, but only one can speak. When offered a chance to voice all she's ever wanted to tell Rarity, what will Opal say, and will the mare she looks up to even be able understand it?
I half except the kitty cat to curse rarity out about everything, she done
7842961 Actually, that's done entirely intentionally, at least at the beginning.
7842988 to me at least this is beautifully written and i can see this being used as a lead into a longer story if you so wished
To paraphrase Mark Twain: never share a bath with a cat. It wastes your blood, and it annoys the cat.
So good
How do I know you're my baby?
Tough scales? late nights helping?
You are my baby , You will never speak of the other stuff again!
More kitty kibbles? Black mail? OPAL!
More kitty what?
this was an unexpected journey.
good twist
good kitty
This is definitely worth a sequel linger story. I want to see Opal dealing with being a pony/cat hybrid with Rarity trying to integrate her "baby" into pony society.
Hmm. Definitely not what I was expecting, especially not someone successfully training a cat to do anything. But everything has a young and impressionable phase. In the end, a very cute little story with communication issues that feel organic rather than artificially preserving the plot. Thank you for it.
All of my thoughts on this fic summed up in this video
Sequel please.