The RED Engineer's cream gravy machine accidentally created an inter-dimensional portal that sucks the RED team into the land of Equestria! Will they get out of it? Will Spike actually date Rarity? And did i eat breakfast this morning? The answer to all three rhetorical questions is: Probably not. Watch as the hat-loving mercenaries of Teufort manage to get sucked into the land of four-hooved cartoon characters.
Warning: Contains gore and mild swearing, and probably racism from the Soldier
Chapters (1)
First.
Also, this is gonna be good.
"The scroll was passed around. As the Pyro read it, he didn't frown but jumped for joy." So pyro is a brony?
I guess the pyro is a brony... not surprised at all.
By the way this is promising. I hope you expand upon this soon.
Sweet Celestia YES!
You did good son, Maybe even the best.
Oh lawdy. I want to see if the Rainblower and Lollichop make an appearance.
Do believe in maaagic?
This is so fair hiiiiiiiiiiiiilarius!!!!
keep it up.
It's good and funny, but remember, Tab button is your friend.
MLP doesn't even exist yet in their world, how does Pyro know Fluttershy?
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The Soldier angered a magician.
Also: Refer to Earbuds, aluminum bats (Not until 2 years after actual storyline) and Grordbort.
And thank y'all for the comments.
And yes, Pyro is a brony. DO BELIEVE IN MAGIC.
Luna plays TF2?
Im bored.....mind putting something funny in? and dont forget about the soldiers racism like you said in the description
This is amazing, one of the best stories I've read. Keep up the good work lad
oh my god pyro is a brony in equestria and lunas fan girling over tf2......SO MUCH WIN PLEASE DO CONTINUE
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Eeyup.
OH MEIN GOD
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After watching Meet the Pyro I wasnt surprised about Pyro getting excited about the letter.
854073 So, when will the next chapter be out? Before or after Half Life 3?
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After nine years in development, hopefully it'll be worth the wait.
That is to say, I dunno. I've been trying to figure out where to take this; serious like in Waking Nightmares (A story on FanFiction involving ponies, Slenderman and TF2) or just bizarrely silly (While adding a certain skeleton detective and his 17-year old female sidekick). Probably the latter.
1571824 I have read both of them. Both are great. Also, I've seen some authors say just to start writing and let the story "tell itself". Dunno if that'll help, but write a rough chapter and see how you like it.
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Alright, I'll do that. Hopefully it'll give me motivation. I tend to lose motivation if it's a big project (I want to make the chapters about 10,000 words long each). Thanks for the advice
1573521 No problem, also I know that feeling. I have it for every school project. In existence.