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ManicQuill


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not bad, though personally, i'd prefer a bit more exposition as to why those ships happened

7832877 I might do a sequel (or prequel) to give more insight to those later. This was just a little thing that I wanted to test the waters.

A very nice fluffy Dom / Sub story.

I agree with musicman722, some background would be nice although I accept it's not strictly necessary. What I liked the most was the air of consensuality in this story.

Nice job! If only this was a comic... :twilightsheepish:

"Oh, oh! I helped with the wrapping." Sonata added with a clap while the others were looking at their own gifts. Rainbow Dash looked confused by her girlfriends comment. Sonata leaned in and whispered something to Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash was thrown into a coughing fit as she looked at Fluttershy with a cheeky grin, matching Adagio's.

I wonder how this conversation played out...

8007991 Yeah, but I don't have money to comission someone.

8008004 Oh! Oh! Oh! Lets see how Rainbow, Sunset, Adagio and Sonata play out! Please????

8027603 We'll see... After all we do have a holiday coming up.

hey manicquill this is pokemon24 aka billy king and i think not to tell you what to do why not put a part 2 to don't not open till christmas
with a very anger and gagged aria blaze

hey manicquill want will you be doing the next part of don't open till Christmas i want to see the look on Aria Blaze want fluttershy have some sexy fun with her your fiend pokemon24 aka billy king :pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::twilightblush::twilightsmile::raritywink::rainbowkiss::rainbowlaugh:🤣😂😅😆😁😄😃😀😇🤡

hey manicquill when will they be a part 2 in don't till Christmas ?

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