Aspiring good writer, mostly for comedy that is, hope you can make some good criticism.
Spike finds himself stuck with a whole bunch of scrolls that he must deliver to Canterlot, an easy task if it weren’t for the fact that he is unable to use his flames due to digestive problem that he got after eating some spoiled diamonds. Now he must find a way to deliver those scrolls, however that task is going to be more difficult than he though it would be.
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P.S. what was sent to Princess Celestia was sent POSTAGE DUE...
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7823592 Thanks you for the feedback, will do
7823649 No idea how to react to this but a comment is a comment
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what he said....
7823955 Nice drawing dude, did you do this?
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Loosed??? lost
7814856 What's that suppose to mean?
How exactly do diamonds spoil?
7843602 Magic! Anyway explaining how geology works in a land of pastel ponies is pointless, regardless you did made me think of explaining some unexplained parts of this story
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7843370 Darn it! Curse your meticolous grammar observations
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