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Darkened Paradise


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This is just a collection of ideas that I have just lounging around in my head and needed to be written down. So yeah, these are just random bits and pieces that probably won't go anywhere. To be honest, I have no idea how I came up with half of these. Expect to see a lot of Crossovers, Alternate Universes and just a whole Random mess of things.

That said, if anyone wants to take any of the ideas, by all means, have at it. I just ask that you tell me ahead of time.

Cheers, friends.

P.S. I don't know who made the cover image. If you did, please let me know so I can credit you.

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Comments ( 37 )

It's good...
But it's also weird...
It dosn't make sence...
And it dosn't have a reason...
I LOVE IT!!!! :rainbowlaugh::trollestia:

"'What,' the Doctor started, swallowing the apple he was chewing on. 'did I just watch here?'"

LIES. The Doctor HATES apples!

844644 You do realize that's against the rules, right?

845038>>845014 I'm mad right now! PS. You lost the game. :trollestia:

That little chapter alone makes me want to demand for a whole story about Harry Potter being the servant of Nightmare Moon!:flutterrage:

845611
Yeah... He only really like fish-sticks.... and custard. Together.

Check the 2010 season, episode 1.

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!!!!!!! just bring more harry potter , ok? put a troll picture as yes, and no as a pic of my profile picture.

845611
Either way you have to have a big throat to swallow and apple whole.

FUCK YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH HUMAN ELEMENTS OF HARMONY
FUCK YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!*ends song*

I'm liking it. My only question is where you're starting the story, considering it looks like Twilight already has Yuri's Fell Arm. Other than that, it looks great. Go for the full story if you're willing to do it.

I like this idea. may I tinker with it.845611

1882144

By all means, have at it.

I'm curious to see what people can do with these ideas

1882267 might alter a few things, include the hallows and such.

1882442

As long as you at least mention where you got the idea from, you can do whatever you want to it.

1882483 You mind if I remove the Doctor parts and alter the main chapter part and use it as a prolouge to the rest of the story.

1882671

Thats fine. The Doctor part was really suppose to be just my own version of adding in Author's Notes.

1882703 Alrighty than. I'm gonna get started than.

1882703 question: is harry suppose to be an alicorn in this as you have him bear wings in human form and a horn in pony form.

1882757

Well, that segment is all up to you. Originally, he comes in, rampaging as alicorn, but when he's 'purified', he would turn into a regular Earth Pony, the characteristics of the Unicorn and Pegasus cropping up (but never at the same time), kinda like a Metamorphagus or a Changeling.

Really, its all up to you.

As for the masque itself, it turns Harry into what essentially is an anthromorphic and male Nightmare Moon on Earth. In Equestria, he becomes, and stays, as a pony. The masque becomes a part of Harry completely.

1882773 Alright. This information helps quite a bit.

1883121 I changed the title to Harry Potter knight of the moon.

looking at him

Suddenly, genderswap!

The voice comes

This whole paragraph is in present tense

then finds what

This too (not the whole paragraph this time)

the girl frowns

SO MUCH TENSE INCONSISTENCY!!! I don't think I'm even going to point it out anymore

a few questions." The voice said

Comma, lower case t

before she answered

Missed a period

As soon as he did, the ground beneath him

More genderswap!

1886564

Holy crap...thanks man. I appreciate you pointing out all these errors. (I guess this goes to show I shouldn't be writing at 3 in the morning...)

844990
sorry mate. the Doctor hates pears. not apples.

This is awesome, you should totally base a full crossover story on this! :pinkiehappy:

If you did, please let me know so I can accredit you.

Don't you mean credit?

I wish this had been turned into a full story. This idea was great! :pinkiehappy:

I love I please write a complete story with that idea.

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