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Spartan889


Just a normal dude who loves making fics

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I just simply go to Comic con with my friends then buy a Katana from a creepy merchant guy who transported me to Equestria. Now I lead a mix species Dynasty kingdom in Equestria, have some sort of bug-like pony have crush on me. A draconequus as my best friend and public enemy no.1 of the entire populace of Equestria well except for PonyVille. Well TO ADVENTURE!!!!

Note: The gundam is human size.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 56 )

Just, wow.
More please!

MOAR!?!?!?!:heart::fluttercry:

… Not sure what to think of this… There are several major apparent spelling errors… But if that were cleaned up, it would be rather presentable. And because one can never NOT like Dynasty Warriors, or Gundam, I must put this to my Read Later list. Fix it up somewhat, and I'll set it to Favorite. I expect great things from one who picked such an utterly badass topic. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to work on my own Displaced stories.

You seem to have put Deadpool in this story. I love it!

Wait, I HAVE TO SAY i LOVE IT SO FAR, BUT... what? A mech from some franchise I don't recognize using hand signs from Naruto? How does that work?

I can see this being a fun read :pinkiehappy:

dynasty warriors dynasty warriors DYNASTY WARRIORS
hell yes i never thought it would happen but someone did it it may not be dynasty warrriors classic with lu bu zhao yun and xu shu but it is still dynasty warriors and i expect plenty of ham action and character in this ok maybe not two of those three but from what i can see it is looking amazing and i cannot wait until the next one

Welp time listen to some music.

^Think it should be a 'to' between there

[youtube=https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=fUDkHKvHbGQ]

^need to remove the m. from the url

But not twenty percent cooler than Rainbow Dash."

^Don't really need the 20% cooler bit but it your story I just think: "But not as cool as Rainbow Dash." would sound better.

"This place is like a goddamn maze!" I shouted and amke another turn but stop once I heard a few distant voices.

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I love this guy :rainbowlaugh: Please make more :pinkiehappy:

5708462 Well, he a guy turn living mecha in a word of talking ponies and magic....
Maybe he found out that using hand signs like those from Naruto let him use magic or something?

I concentrated all of my power into my Denkoumaru as water starts to circle around my Naginita blade, with a mighty swing, I launched my Naginita right at the barrier along

I think the word for the weapon you were looking for is Naginata, as in a samurai halberd. Also try to work a little on your spelling. Other than that, you mat have something going there.

Santa with a shotgun... well that's certainly something new to me :pinkiehappy: still wonder how much of his empire could be left by now

more important point last I checked the character was a mobilesuit... so why exactly can he fit in the halls of palace ... seriously a zaku is what 17.5m by a quick look at a site and a standard 58.1 tons.... and in the dynasty games everything's the same basic size on screen so he should be rather large and heavy.

both the Musha and the musha2 (apparently some ps2 only version) are 18m overall height...seriously the palace cannot be that tall... and really that's seems like what he should be if he's basing off of a mobile suit!

http://gundam.wikia.com/wiki/Musha_Gundam
http://gundam.wikia.com/wiki/Musha_Gundam_Mk._II

if your modifying it to be more human height I either missed it or you haven't noted it yet which is important as a fight or just movement between a 60ton machine stomping everything in the garden and fighting guards and using weapons is a lot different of a soldier around the same height of said guards (and if its the first also proves, sanity, intelligence or self preservation is utterly dead in the guards... seriously 18m machine leave that for the beings said to be moving the sun and moon. that's above your combat, level and pay grade for small swords and shields you should be evacuating the city if you have any military mind. seriously your best weapon is harmony what is a small sword or a few energy bolts going to do this is chunk of moon grade combat machine) ( I can only imagine them as skivers trying to use twigs on dragon if this is the case.)

i am currently think teh fuck but am also intrigued

Just to kill my curiosity the moves that Shin Musha Gundam using are they canon to the real deal or are you taking that stuff from multiple sources?

have you read the displaced fics about Dullahan the headless and the one about the samurai swordsman of epicness Gilgamesh by any chance?

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The moves Shin Musha Gundam use are not from the game but an idea I came up with after watching a few Naruto episodes and also he's armor is also Samurai theme.

5752994 i knew there was some Naruto going on here :P

So, another gundam displaced? Cool! I am very interested to see where this goes, and I might have a new 2nd favorite gundam! If you're up for a crossover later on, give me a call on skype. Good luck with this story, my friend. Skype xzsamzilla7.

Why does everything goes to Tarterus fast

^ Tartarus

Celestia was wielding a large broadSword and a War axe as Luna wields a scythe and a spear-axe.

^need to be spaced (+ anywhere else where you did the same)

But he should be weak enough to be vulnerable to the Elements of harmony.

^ pretty sure the h should be cap here (+ anywhere else where you did the same)

I exited out of my meditation and slowly touch the geound with my arms crossed.

^ground

but she quickly recovers and coms charging

^comes

But I heard several groan comjng

^groans coming

Your kingdom was a threat to entire world and must be eradicated

^should be a 'the' between these two

creating a large explosion Thus send us flying

^don't need to cap the t

about to collaspe and crush Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie

^collapse also forgot the .

The alicorn quickly dodge it but her wings were singed causing her to cringe in pain

^forgot the .
Also you don't cap the v in Ponyville
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"Threat!? Threat! We didn't attack you or any other kingdoms! It was you and your allies who attacked us first! We defended ourselves from your armies!"

^I feel this was a perfect opportunity to add something like:
"You are the villain here! The Monster!! The Murderer!!!"
That would've have been a brutal mind fu*k :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

5752994 hah i new couldn't remember moves like that from the game

5753210
Unfortunately I don't have skype but you can send a private message in FIMfiction.

5754496 yeah, Skype just tends to be quicker. Still, PM is fine. :twilightsheepish:

This certainly earns the random tag. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.

5753210 clearly you haven't fought him enough its only fun when your playing him from my experience in GDW 1

I want to like this, I really do. However, unfortunately for you, I recently read Gilgamesh's story. That is how you do a random character who is incredibly powerful and charismatic. Sure, Shin could of just beat respect for him out of his dynasty, but as soon as he was gone it would collapse. Meanwhile, Gilgamesh is a goofball who wants to fight some one at full strength and not worry about killing them, win or lose. So long as he can fight some one strong, he doesn't care. Also, a naginata is a pole arm type weapon. You have to weild it with both hands. Same for the spear. The machine gun is just that, a machine gun, use as desired. Finally, the best way to weild a katana is like a two handed long sword, with a bit more centering. That's not to say you can't weild a katana in a style similar to a hand-and-a-half sword which uses speed mainly and both hands for more powerful strikes, but what are you doing with your other arm when you aren't going all out for either one or a series of strikes? In the case of Gilgamesh, he can get away with wielding four weapons at once because he can grow six additional arms.

I find this story rather amusing i wish for more my good sir.:moustache:

i know this is supposed to be random but i really want to find out about his dynasty he made

keep up the good work

Be weary that you do not copy "The Mighty Warrior of Epicness"

5795973 Well, so far he has done OTHER funny things, and that is not a problem. Two different stories with different maincharacters are allowed to be both funny.

Can you finish the story I love it

"Ain'tnobodygottimeforthat!"

Word.

Oh shut up Diamond Tiara you spoiled sack of shit!

HALLELUJAH!

i've only got one thing to say..MOAR:flutterrage:

from which Game is he, that he can make those moves?
I have nothing against this first chapter, but it looks a bit rushed, i mean according to other displaced storys, he reached Luna pretty fast.

I don´t know the game, but it looked like he was a Ninja like Naruto, and a martial artist, are this the abiliys, he is supposed to have as a Robot thing?
Is he a Human in a armor, or a suit? I mean if he is going to get a romance, he should possible have a normal Body. I mean i don´t want to have sex scenes, but i can´t image someone to date him, if he even could not sleep with them if they love each other enough. I guess, even someone that isn´t only interessted in that kind of thing, would like to have sex sometimes.

Okay i am interessted i keep track of the story.

Some one has to make a picture of Santa Musha Gundam with his shotgun punishing naughty guards...like now,

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:
My Sides a numb, it's to much humor!

I'm loving this so far, please keep up the great work!! :yay:

When is the new chapter going to come out

do you still write your stories?

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