Yerok was once a feared demon of Hell's army. He was respected and revered for his ruthless efficiency on the battlefield. The demon fought for Hell, against the impossibly powerful armies of both Heaven and Earth, and always came out on top. Nothing could stop him... until the day he broke an ancient law of Hell.
Yerok was sealed away for his crime. Forced into a solitary prison in an unknown realm, he stayed there until his mind shattered, and continued to suffer alone. Then, one fateful day, two ponies stumbled upon his tomb. They mined through the wall of his prison and awoke him from his sightless, soundless abyss. Now, the lands of Equestria are at the mercy of one of Hell's greatest warriors... may God have mercy on their souls.
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I'm confused... Is it Yerok or Yorek? If the main characters in this story were voiced, what would they sound like?
7792740 lol, thank you for catching that. I accidentally slipped up when I wrote that at the end of the chapter. It's meant to be Yerok (ye-roc), but my fingers went with an old character name instead.
If this is the "teen" sex scene, I'm terrified to think of what the MATURE one was like.
Not seeing his meeting with Twilight feels like I was cheated out of something.
Cliffhanger NOOOOOO
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Lmao!
Thanks for your comments, they were a pleasant surprise this morning. Yes, the more mature version that I would have gone with held a lot more intimacy and a deeper, more in-depth selection of words to enhance the mental visuals.
As for the short stop in Ponyville, I didn't intend to have any main characters involved in this story, sorry. This is still just a side story that I work on for fun as a change in pace.
And yes... I too am a horrible writer with a sinister craving to keep my readers hanging on the edge, keeping the next deliciously enchanting step of my tales just outside of their reach.
Thanks again for your comments and I hope you enjoy what comes next when I get around to it. :)
This writing reminds of sherrilyn Kenyon's books
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Well thank you. I haven't read any of her works, but I've heard of her. :)
Why was this cancelled?