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When Princess Luna became Nightmare Moon, her sister banished her to the moon with the Elements of Harmony. But in a separate universe, Nightmare Moon was able to turn the tables and banished Celestia to the sun. Because of this Nightmare Moon is the new Queen of Equestria, and while some welcome her rule, there are those who lurk in the shadows, waiting to put an end to the queen's rule.
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This is very bare bones. There is almost no detail here...I hope something more happens than one singular event per chapter.
7839947
There will be more detail later on. I just had to get this out of the way before the rest happens.
7839966 Okay.
7839966 what's the romance tag for? What's the ship?
7839976
Can't say, it's a secret.
7839980 I only ask cause I see a tag for "brad"
And I refuse to read any story with a "Flash" ship.
At least tell me if it is FlashLight or not
7839986
Well to be honest I haven't fully determined the ship yet. So you'll just have to wait and see.
7839990 I will read then. But if it turns into a "Brad" ship, then I will stop following the story. I hope you understand should that happen
7839993
I understand completely. One of my friends is a flashlight hater too.
7839994 Im kinda confused about something.
Right here
You only said her eyes had changed from their slitted appearance to their regular appearance. You never said that her outward appearance changed, so surely the guards would be in distress and wary when they notice that the figure before them looks nothing like Luna.
Surely they would notice that Nightmare Moon was NOT Luna, despite they eyes.
7839994 just figured I'd let you know
7840088
Makes sense. I'll fix that.
7840101 much better. Now it makes more sense
Aayyyyyy.
Not the best opening to a story I've read, but we'll see where this goes.
7840183
I'm not all to good with openings.
That escalated quickly. Like...really quickly.
Huh, so a Celestia cult.
I guess it's different from the usual Nightmare Moon cult
I think it was splendid. I write my own books and am starting a book. Can you help me?
7841272
I don't see why not.
7841498 Halo and Star Wars! Dude, I am hooked already! All hail Queen Luna!
7842474
Where did Halo and Star Wars come from?
I hope there some flashlight shipping
7842793 A Covenant insult to MCPO John-117 aka Master Chief and the classic Star Wars line "May the Force be with you." I have an eye for spotting potential references to games and films in fanfics. I will also say that this is a great introduction to the main story! Keep it up! :-)
7843579
What line is the covenant?
"Unless she lost one when I knocked her unconscious. You know, since I lack the ability to solve problems without violence or threats."
Methinks Luna's testing somepony else here as well, and yeah, Flash is failing. Hard.
7843615 "The Demon" . ;-)
7844589
Oh! I get it now.
7844330
Knocking someone unconscious is perfectly safe. My brother does it to me all the time and I'm perfectly fine.
Mostly.
7843566
7843615 I hope not! As I said before should that happen I will immediately stop reading this story
7845338 what dose that have to do with me. I don't care if you read the story or not
Hmm...interesting dynamic here. Hope Flashlight happens here, it would work if Twilight turns up the tsundere act a little.
7845338 Real mature...
7845380 I was referring you to hoping that there will be Brad Waifustealer x Twilight shipping
7845654 I dont care what you think. Im entitled to my own opinions, likes and dislikes
7845676 Of course you are entitled. But please be mature about it.
Nobody cares if Twilight is your waifu.
7845676 again I don't care if you hate the ship or read the fic. The comment I left wasn't directed at you. I didn't even know you left a comment
Hmm...that happened quickly. I thought she wouldn't get there till the night of the celebration. Huh.
7847833
Technically the celebration happens at dawn, and because Luna switch the day and night cycle during her first rule as queen, her return happened during the night time instead of day.
7847880 Oh okay. I didn't know that. Did you say that earlier in one of the chapters?
7847920
It's something that happened but wasn't mentioned in any of the chapters yet.
7847942 Oh...okay. That makes sense.
Damn son, was it necessary to knock the poor Twilight and Spike out? I actually laugh at that part, but shiiit.
7847942 I'm seeing too many signs of FlashLight. Even Pinkie said it, so unless you can say what ship it actually is, I'm afraid I'm gonna have to stop reading the story
I am totally lost. Did we skip the first two episodes? And Celestia was fine with what happened to her? So...why is Luna the Queen anyways? Nothing changed.
7857255
Celestia is fine with everything that has happened because her sister rules the way she did. With kindness and peace. As for Celestia, she is technically dead. Her body is destroyed but her spirit lives. She's basically a ghost. As for Luna being a Queen, that will be explained later on.
7857391 Oh...that's kinda depressing.
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"Aw, dude, did she say stoned ponies? Righteous..!"
So Flash might have a thing for Fluttershy? Interesting...I'm down for that.
7849785
Before Flash had left he did some research and learned that it was impossible to pry Twilight from her books. Therefore, to avoid her from disobeying Luna's orders, knocked her out.
Hm.
Would've preferred Scootaloo being Flash's sister...
And DANG!
Queen Luna needs to teach her guards not to threaten kids with death penalty upon accidently entering her chambers. They could lose their jobs over that...