Time to see how well I can create a business from nothing more then a few tools and a magical emerald to work with and bad luck hitting me at every corner.
Shadow: Finally! A displaced story with my favorite Sonic character! I do have one I'm creating too, I'm only finishing the third chapter before releasing it, so let's see where this one goes!
The first thing that came through my head was, "I HAVE TO GO THROUGH FUCKING PUBERTY AGAIN!"
Ok... He's picking up on what's going on really fast.... Like, how does he know he's 8 without really looking himself over? And why not take his clothes? It'd be more fun if he was naked for a while...
He also used chaos control reeeaaly easily, considering how it's supposed to work. You should probably read up on stuff like that before implementing it, and have a bit more explanation as to how it's happening, especially if you want to write about invention.
I'm finding the concept interesting so far, but I feel like the execution needs polish, and you already told me about your English skills. I'll read the rest later...
Shadow: Finally! A displaced story with my favorite Sonic character! I do have one I'm creating too, I'm only finishing the third chapter before releasing it, so let's see where this one goes!
I like where this is going!
Interesting I look forward to seeing how this develops.
Ok... He's picking up on what's going on really fast.... Like, how does he know he's 8 without really looking himself over? And why not take his clothes? It'd be more fun if he was naked for a while...
He also used chaos control reeeaaly easily, considering how it's supposed to work. You should probably read up on stuff like that before implementing it, and have a bit more explanation as to how it's happening, especially if you want to write about invention.
I'm finding the concept interesting so far, but I feel like the execution needs polish, and you already told me about your English skills. I'll read the rest later...
Alright this seems well.