Started writing on this site at 11, came to an end at 19... but then came back at 20 to finish what I started.
"So what happened when this... Sunset Shimmer came here?"
"Oh, you should've seen it. It was like people were terrified of her the second she came through the door."
"But not you? You both squared up to her and called her buddies boy toys? Why did she not kill you?"
"Well, I'll tell you..."
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Hmm... interesting, but this doesn't give the pull that it needs to gather more... probably because it just begun... I'll look more into this in the future....
Watch out, we got a badass over here
not bad at all. it does feel a tad bit rushed, but it isn't a bad story.
7791515 So... you liked it, then?
I like the premise but I feel like this was written a bit quickly...I also would have gone all out and made it a clop but that's just me. Otherwise you have something here.
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Thanks for the feedback- I know that it was rushed, but that was because I wanted to get to the other fics that this one is connected to. This won’t be the last time we see Cloud Sweeper.
I’ll admit, he got guts.
I’m surprised he hasn’t beaten up snips and/or snails at this point.
Ok, now it’s payback time.
Ok, forget what I said during the first chapter.