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Everyone always told you playing with fire was dangerous - now for the first time ever you can say they were wrong!
Little Inferno Entertainment Fireplace is a product of Soot Inc.
((Based on the game Little Inferno. The story will differ heavily from that of the game.))
-GM, master of this way down.
This could work. I like the premise.
So, it's like Pyromania the Playset?
I'm tracking.
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Pretty much exactly what it is. Burn things, have fun.
Totally safe and not likely to have any psychological effects whatsoever.
At all.
-GM, master of mites.
This shows promise. Instantaneous Follow.
Good chapter. I presume that the cold of winter will pick up dramatically?
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Well yes, but maybe not quite in the way you are expecting.
-GM, master of mork.
This story, short though it is, really deserves a lot more attention than it's getting.
Nothing can go wrong, until it does
7798252 I dunno, it hit the front page already, XD
I do agree though that this is a great story.
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Wanderlost hit the front page.
This one's still a relative unknown.
-GM, master of pork.
7798332 Then I have made a mistake.
Well, I see a twist in the future
Ah, there's that conflict
VI is 6. 4 is IV.
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AAAAAA BAD TYPO BAD TYPO!!!
Fixed. Thanks for pointing it out.
-GM, master of ice.
This is a surprising, but most interesting twist.
This is a comment.
XD But seriously, I loved this story, it was great, and didn't linger longer than it needed to.
Whoa... did not see that coming.
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Guess I'm good at my job then huh?
Thanks for reading all this time!
-GM, master of icons.
A bit dark but what could you expect from a Little Inferno.
7798391 this is gonna end like with Sugar Plums
(Go to 21:15 in the video)
YouTube Video Name: THINGS ARE GETTING WEIRD | Little Inferno # 5
YouTube Channel: JackSepticEye
...you did finish the game, didn't you?
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Yes I did, there's a reason this says "the story will differ heavily from that of the game." I wanted to tell my own story.
Sorry if that wasn't what you were looking for.
-GM, master of furs.
So you live off of comments, eh? Will you become a wrathful comment monster if we discard all of our negative comments in your various comment boards?
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I NEED THOSE FEEDBACKS. NEEEEEEEEEEED. LET THEM STAAAAAY.
-GM, master of backfeed.
This is exedingly odd. WELP! More noise juice!
By Yggdrasll.
Ash and Oak, that's sad.
I like this because FIRE.
Pretty sure that Twilight is gone and this is Starlight.
P.S. from 2023:
Wow. I am so glad I started leaving actual comments along with the proofreading. All by themselves they just feel so... Clinical? Heartless? (In the unfeeling way, not the malicious way.)
Not me at all.
I enjoyed the Crusader shenanigans, a lovely point of levity before what is surely going to be even more levity. After all, I'm sure the Entertainment Fireplace was tested thoroughly before being sold to innocent ponies.
Huh, not only does Starlight know what a human is, but the Soot Corporation makes dolls of them? How strange.
Because if these things get popular, Ponyville's gonna get as sooty as Industrial Revolution era London. AND NO OTHER REASONS.
I figured I'll leave comments covering multiple chapters, since they're so short.
Chapter I:
Missing space.
Chapter II:
grin
Okay, since it's spoken, not narration, this could be on purpose. But it feels like an oddity.
Spike
Go for it Twilight! One more capital letter and you ascend to divinity!
I wish this was my first time through, so I could speculate, but I don't know how much my thoughts are colored by foreknowledge.
Noo...
Off dammed spot!
Chapter 3:
It.
stuff
Chapter 4:
There’s a lot of ways for this one to go. A few weeks, a week, weeks, but not a weeks.
This cannot last forever!
Yeah, I think by now I definitely noticed the signs of compulsion magic.
That it does. It's progressed past the initial stage. It's not even really hiding anymore, just telling everypony not to care.
That ain't right. Twi, I know you get mad sometimes, but you're starting to scare me.
Well, they've finally found it. That's good.
Chapter V:
bricks
I could be mistaken, but I believe you mean limbs.
knows
Chapter VI:
first
I think this should be billowed. That, or was billowing.
could
None can see the great Oz!
I've never even seen him!
Well, that could've gone a lot worse.
Fluttershy should be capital. And what is usually used with a question mark.
As I
Then
There are a lot of extra line breaks. Is that on purpose, or a typo?