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Zantetsuken


The only "fanfiction writer" who doesn't know how to write.

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Applejack and Rainbow Dash's rivalry is near-legendary among their friends, but has always followed a simple rule: Keep their other friends out of it. Today, Rainbow feels like breaking that rule. Meaning Applejack will have to get creative and play a bit dirtier than usual.

Special thanks to these fine people

Edited and Proofread by Setokaiva
AMAZING cover art made by Zolfyyy

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 11 )

This is great!:twilightsmile: Keep going!:yay:

What will the actual cover art look like?

7773596 It will be a scene from the story illustrated.

That's the simplest way to describe it really.

Ooh-hoo-hoo, off to a great start! This is gonna be fun!

This was an awesome chapter!

Thank you for the story, it was fun!

7800878 You're welcome, glad you liked it! :)

Geez, you get your characters spot-on!
See you in June!

7800991 Thank you so much. I put writing characters in character above all else when writing. It's the golden rule that my stories live and die by.

Also I don't know if my next story will actually be released in May or June. I mean it might be, but that was more of a playful jab at myself for how slow I'am. I should be able to crank out one short story before May or June at the very least If I'm being honest, but we will see what happens.

Hehe I think the story is good, though I would like to point out that Rarity, Rainbow, and Pinkie seem a bit out of character to me considering all of their development they've had.

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