While 'Taming of the Screw' felt more gritty and real, this story takes a more fanciful turn.
Think of Screw Ball as the Bat-Mite of the Batman universe. A being of near-infinite magical powers, in an otherwise normal world.

Also, with two main characters having such similar names, lets keep a running tally of how many times I accidentally refer to Screw Ball as Screw Loose. I'll catch as many as I can in proofing, but feel free to post any errors that slip through the cracks.

Again, thanks for reading and thanks for the feedback!

Dat name is best name so far.

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Ok, time to be serious,
"pony.This was Screw Ball."
Space after full stop required,
That's it so far.

This is just "Screwed Up" dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Rainbow_dealwithit.png

Ok this is a random suggestion/question. Does Screw Loose get pregnant?

This dosen't feel as good as the original. The sex scene was too short and had very little build up nor detail. I don't mean to offend you as your're not finished yet, but so far it feels inferior.

No matter how absurd or out there a story sounds, I will always read it because you wrote it. I mean that with all due respect. The idea of Taming of the Screw did seem pretty crazy, but you made it great. I absolutely loved Taming of the Screw. It felt like it was more than just some cheap clopfic. Also really liked all your other stories. I can't wait to read this one.

i am sorry but what in hells unholy name did i just read? it felt like i was reading a gluttons wet dream combined with ponies! screwball, you have some serious issues! cheers!-grabs a bottle of soda and raises it high, then downs in in a single breath-

A continuation of TotS? IT BEGINS.

Well this is weird ...Well written, but weird.