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I love writing and my very first fanfic is on here. Any kind of feed back helps me out so please don't be shy and let me know what you think of my work. <3

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All Sweetie Bell wants to do is sing. Unfortunately she receives horrible news about her declining health and ends up only having one more day left to live. Her only wish is to sing the song she wrote and with the help of her family and friends they grant it.

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I'm sorry but to me the fear of losing her voice sounds like an awful reason for refusing to have the operation and thereby giving up on life. I would have made Sweetie Belle go through with it. She might hate me but that's a price I'd be willing to pay in exchange for her life.

This was quite the read. I don't read many stories like these, since they aren't really my cup of tea, but I will say this is good for the most part. Good work. :raritywink:

7714191 Thanks a lot! I'm glad it could stand out to you and you decided to take a look. :twilightsmile:

This is a very good and very sad one-shot.

7714810 Thank you. Yeah I was in a quite sombre mood when I wrote this.

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