It has been centuries since the slender ponies murdered his ponies. now he finally has a chance to get his revenge, and not even the two princesses can stop him.
This is my first story so criticism is welcomed.
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I like what you have here. just a very major tip. its spelt "Prologue"
Im guessing the black ponies are along the lines of a large force of slenderman ponies?
832737 Thanks for that, and yes those are slenderman ponies.
By any chance, would you be in need of a pre-reader?
832834 Not right now, but if I need one in the future I'll let you know.
832853 okie dokie lokie
Hi there!
Haven't read it yet, but you should know you used the wrong "its" in the description.
832963 Thanks for telling me.
This has potential! Tracking!
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