• Published 10th Nov 2016
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Rising Sunsets - Bahamut0



The story of Golden Rise and Sunset and their growing relationship

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Epilogue

"Okay Gold. What did you want to show me?", Sunset asked.

"It isn't exactly something I can show you. Rather, it's something I can give you. Dad let me use the card creator. And I thought these would capture your essence perfectly."

"You already gave me your late adopted mother's ring. That shows how much I mean to you more than enough."

"I know. But Burst told me that going a little bit of the extra mile can go a long way. I made these with you in mind." Gold then brought out a small box. "Go ahead. Open it." Sunset opened the box and was speechless with joy. Inside lay three cards that gold had made for her alone. "Their names are Daydream Sorceress, Fire Paladin, and last but not least....Solar Flare Dragon." As Gold spoke, all three of the monsters materialized. "They're pretty eager to meet you." Sorceress looked like she was wearing the clothes of Sunset's Daydream Form, Paladin looked like a more powerful version of Flame Swordsman with cooler armor, and lastly Solar Flare Dragon had flaming scales mixed in with dark red scales and was the first to speak.

"It's nice to finally meet you Sunset.", she said.

"So you're the one Gold was going on about.", Paladin quipped.

"Don't ruin the moment Flame.", Sorceress scolded.

"So do you like them?", Gold asked nervously. Sunset smiled and pulled him into a hug.

"Gold. You always rise to the occasion.", she said with a smile and kissed him. The monsters returned to their world to let the couple enjoy the moment.

"And you're what makes my life shine Sunset."

Comments ( 7 )

7712236

Just finished the epilogue.

7712305 Awwwww so beautiful! I really did enjoy this surprise a lot! He made Sunset 3 cards and one looks like he daydream shimmer form!... I've really enjoyed this Epilogue... now they are 2 left before the final relationship couple storie and they are Shadow Thunder and Starlight and Steel Edge and Rainbow Dash then it's Burst Celestia and moon... to be honest I'm looking forward for the Shadow Thunder and Starlight one because I'm wondering if it's going to be the same with him and Starlight like his brothers relationships because between Ace and Sonata…Sonata was worried ace was still under her family spell and thought that was the reason he was in love with her and for Dark Ice and Indigo Zap…Ice was worried that Indigo was not going to love him anymore once he told her his past and what he did.., so I'm wondering if Shadow Thunder and Starlight relationship story will be similar or different to Ace and Sonata and Ice and Indigo relationships



Overall though I absolutely love the epilogue

7712397
Glad to hear you're excited! And also that you loved the story.

Nice continuity with my cards. I never really explained how Sunset got Solar Flare Dragon. But this covers it.

7712892

So I take it yo really like the story?

7712532

I just started working on the next story. It should post in a few minutes. Hope you have fun reading!

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