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Pickleless


A man is driving home, thinking about beating his wife. Along the way, he passes a turtle. I am that turtle.

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When Sunset jumped through the portal and bumped into Fluttershy, they swapped bodies.

But Sunset's a determined girl, almost as determined as Fluttershy is benevolent.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 18 )

Maye students liked to respect Sunset's independence,

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OH CELESTIA I'M BECOME A FURRY FAGGOT

*I've

Oh oh, this should get interesting fast.

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Oh come on it's like 1000 words I just went through it agai-

Thanks~! 'Preciate it.

This sounds like a funny story. Of all the people Sunset and Fluttershy switched bodies. :rainbowlaugh:

When do you think the next chapter is?

Looks promising, and a funny start. I'll definitely watch where this goes.

Oh shoot, this is brilliant, more intriguing rather than funny to me, though.
I might have to write this up some time.

Oh dear.

Indeed little unhinged one, indeed!

"Oh!" Fluttershy smiled. "That's why she never liked anyone touching her jacket!"

My sides! There have reached high orbit!! :rainbowlaugh:

Fluttershy proceeded to ruffle through belongings, and pulled out a miniature crowbar, multiple sets of lock picks, a little book full of all the student's embarrassing secrets, silly putty, a lighter, a small can of gasoline, and a switchblade.

:rainbowlaugh: Sounds like my backpack

Too good, too prefect, too everything lol:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::yay:

What we don't see after the chapter ends.

Celestia continued to stare at her, eyes narrowed in confusion, while Fluttershy fought against the desire to curl into a ball under her gaze. She could feel her chest beginning to tighten up. She was going to be blamed for having all of these things, Principal Celestia wouldn't shout at her, it would be so much worse. She would be quietly disappointed in her, and everytime she saw Fluttershy she'd remember, and oh gosh her chest was so tight. Her breathing just kept getting shallower, and shallower.

And then a terrifying clown fell out of Sunset's jacket, the constricting leather returning to its usual snugness, rather the crushing embrace it been.

why did you never update this its great

I so want to see where this is going :pinkiehappy:

update please need to see sunset

Me too. I wanna see what happens

Ha! I totally forgot about Sunset’s line!

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