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For the former apprentice of Princess Celestia, science experiments are fun and enlightening. Then, one day, magical butterflies start haunting Sunset Shimmer from every corner, even hours after the experiment is long done. Now it's time to panic.
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Heh. Just as deliciously silly as always.
Butterflies, your soul.
Shipping and Handling, your heart.
For everything else, theres Discordcard.
An adorable and hilarious adventure in Sunset Science. Nicely done, and thank you for it.
Though I have to wonder, has liquid rainbow been manifesting around Applejack?
So the objects/things that the mane six summon keep appearing around whoever they're infatuated with?
And that bit at the end.
Of course you would, Skirts.
I have the stupidest smile on my face right now. good work!
I totally saw that coming. You go, AJ!
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AJ probably took a Rainbow Shower that morning.
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Please please..Make sequel!
To leave as a cliff hangar on what happens next is cruel!
OK, that was a cute reversal of what I thought would happen at the end.
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And then Sunset was butterfly.
Dat sunshyne, tho. I should have expected it, given the romance tag.
Ohhhmygod. Of course you would.
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Welp... as long as they don't have to free Rarity from a balloon that's suddenly manifested around her and is threatening to carry her away...
Where did this cover art come from?
HOW did this cover art come from?
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It's also in a link in the description.
Write more! Please, please, please, please, please!
I don't think those two things are as random as you'd have us believe.
...
So why does Sunset Shimmer have Twilight scented shampoo anyway?
This just in! Sunset sleeps nude in an oxygen tank which she believes gives her sexual powers!
Fun story Skirts. Cute Flutterbutt is cute.
Woah woah woah! Did I just see a Tiesto reference here?
6274212 Nah, AJ was with Rarity. Rainbow was off pulling some pranks with Pinkie.
Sorrynotsorry!
That was hilarious and adorable! My only problem is that I need more!
F'naaaaa~
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Why does Sunny have Twilight-scented shampoo?
I...want to know what they were talking about, morbidly enough.
Somepony has a cruuuush.
That kiss, though.
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This was adorable, Skirts. You've earned four squee's out of five from me.
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And this is why baconpone is cutest.
is it me or does Sunset's voice sound totally different in that clip
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i have to agree. Her colours are less bright her voice sounds better. I wonder if they explain about it.
Is the chapter title a reference to Scientific Progress Goes Doink? If so, you win an internet.
Fluttershy's got the best wingmen ever.
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Jesus Christ.
Also, dat final scene.
That end, though
6274545 It was cheaper than Spike-scented shampoo.
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Nopony wants Spike scented shampoo anyways.
This was adorable. And hilarious. Adorably hilarious? Hilariously adorable?
Eh, whatever. I liked it!
Bravo. You deserve a Shia Labeouf applause
Ugh. Too sweet. Too funny.
More?
It was an interesting short that raised lots of questions and lots of expectations. I wonder if the Cutie Mark holograms are going to appear in Friendship Games as an extension of the HuMane Six's magic?
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Sunset is so similar to Twilight at times that it is outright scary at times. It seems that Sunset just got her 'Doozy' lesson Twi got with Pinkie earlier.
A Dr. Pepper, on the day Sunset happened to be wearing a lab coat. I think I spy a Steins;Gate reference...
The fact that Rainbow doesn't even question eating random, translucent fruit concerns me a little, however, the subtle nod towards Appledash makes it excusably better.
All in all, very silly and adorable!
Oh Skirts.... this was... exactly what I should have expected from you. Great job
I came in not expecting the SunShyne. But it was very welcome, I love that ship. (SunLight is still my otp though)
Cute as hell, and that ending made me laugh louder than I should at work.
SunShyne huh? That's not a fic I see often. Kudos, Skirts. Though I should admit I'm more partial to the SunAta pairing myself
Aaaand there's Appledash in the background.. Why am I not surprised.
6274362 hnngggggggggggg
Heh, always comes back to AppleDash with you.
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Shout-outs to mah Rarijack.
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Yeah, who'd want to smell like wet dog?
I love me some Shimmershy, so this gets an upvote. I think it went a little over the top toward the end, because the point at which this was traumatic for Sunset instead of fun to read felt...well...yeah.
This needs a second editing pass, because there are a number of minor errors to correct, such as this:
Pretty sure edges don't have desks. Desks DO have edges, though.
Not doing a full line-by-line for you, but I will point out things where you could use some improvement. For example:
Don't do this. If a character has been identified, refer to them by name, not by some oddity like "the woman" or "the lavender unicorn" or "the bipedal creature".
The only thing more strange than your choice of verb here is that you chose to bold it.
I'm...pretty sure this is NOT what you were going for in this scene.
You've got this more than a couple of times. Sunset's eyes aren't blue. They're green. Teal, to be precise.
Rarity would say 'any', not 'no'.
Sunset should just count herself lucky that there's no real equivalent of parasprites in the EG world, because if Fluttershy liked them Sunset wouldn't have had a home left. Or underwear, for that matter. The shipping intensifies!
Aww, even after what she felt was a betrayal, Sunset still misses her mommy ;)
At least butterflies didn't come out of you 'flowerbed'.
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I like the first chapter a lot so far lol
Are you going to do a sequel? Because I want to see what happens next!
All in all, brilliant.
Now this is a pairing we need more of. Brilliant as always, and just the right thing to make me happy and cheerful on a slow morning. Thanks for that!