A Human In Equestria

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Prismmmm

Prismmmm #1 · Nov 22nd, 2016 · · · Meeting A Human ·

This was a fair start to a story, but.. A few questions.

1. Humans can only survive 3 days without water, so how did he survive while in the lake?

2. Another survival thing. He had 3 puncture wounds to the back, and was floating in a river with constant blood loss for a while.

But other then those, this chapter was pretty good.

MrFireSprite

MrFireSprite #2 · Nov 22nd, 2016 · · · Meeting A Human ·

7739572 Thanks for the comment. And to answer your question, he did survive by drinking the river water. And as for the puncture wounds, think of him as a anime character. No matter how much blood he loses he won't die.

Prismmmm

Prismmmm #3 · Nov 22nd, 2016 · · · Meeting A Human ·

7740021 Alright, fair enough. Nice job great job, then!

GrimmWolfDragon

GrimmWolfDragon #4 · Nov 23rd, 2016 · · · Meeting A Human ·

I'm interested in this story

GrimmWolfDragon

GrimmWolfDragon #5 · Mar 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

I'm glad we go a new chapter, still liking the story.

MrFireSprite

MrFireSprite #6 · Mar 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

8048823 I'm glad someone did enjoy this chapter. Thanks for the review.

GrimmWolfDragon

GrimmWolfDragon #7 · Mar 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

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Of course I'm liking the story. The first chapter hook me, and the second chapter is get me hype for the next one.

MrFireSprite

MrFireSprite #8 · Mar 25th, 2017 · · · Chapter 2 ·

8049272 Again, thanks. And if you have any friends on this site, I would appreciate it if you would show them this story, if it isn't too much to ask for. I would like some more readers.

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