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Blissey1


I'm just a Blissey who likes ponies.

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2soft4me.

Gonna drop a like on this, though, because it's gonna need it once the masses get to it.

7702102 Have to agree... way to soft... still, I'll give it a like just cause he's need it..

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Don't worry, the Admin of Overly Stupid Fanfiction are already aware.

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well I did clearly label it as softvore. Not sure what else you were expecting.

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wow rood

7702212 When I here softvore I think of this.. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/273285/raritys-new-spa-treatment Yours was more of like, very basic vore fic.. good start though..

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oh, you're looking for more details swallowing sequences. most of my other stories have that, as will later chapters of this one.

7702212 Oh, I clicked on it expecting soft vore like, the eating part at least. This is so soft it's basically implied.

That's what I meant.

7702374 Though I am guessing they bring her back via magic or something each time.. in which case, sucks to be rainbow even more.

7702467 naw, she dead. each chapter is its own continuity.

7702406 next chapter will have some actual eating!

Enough with the obvious troll fics people.

7702588 Ah... but it would of been so funny having it where Rainbow just keeps getting more and more paranoid about what will eat her next.

7703030 kinda, only with vore and it's not the same day over and over again.

7703662 its in the notes at the end of the chapter

7702806 It is labeled fatal soft vore. For people who are into fatal it's a rather big deal.

7706502 Ever heard of resurrection?? Didn't say she shouldn't die, just that it would of been funny to have twilight bring her back to life with a restored body every time, and just let her get more and more paranoid about getting eaten.

7706520 Yes, that's technically a kind of death, no, that's not the kind of death we're into. There's a special kind of excitement of the idea of someone losing control permanently to their fate, never being able to reassert themselves into their life again in the future. It leaves more of a pit in your stomach, increasing the thrill. Game theory: everything is more important when the stakes are higher.

Your idea is okay of course, it could be funny. But for me, not as erotic.

I don't have anything against non-fatal vore, but sometimes the fans go to fatal stories to complain. Methinks thou dost protest too much. Maybe you would like it if you embraced the thrill. This is sex we're talking about.

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IMO for fatal it lacks a bit in descriptiveness of the actual demise...

7713479 the way other ponies are reacting to it are what clinches the excitement of fatal for me. Big mac had the hots for her and now she's just going to be fertilizer, that's what got my rocks off from this story. just knowing rainbow protested, squirmed, and felt it was so weirdly wrong just being reduced to food and died are all the details I need to know. I can run with an idea once the bare bones details are established.

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And about Big Mac, don't you think it would be much better if instead of just casually saying "oh well, whatever" he at least approached and rubbed the belly? Maybe listened in on what's going inside? And when he goes back to his room, preferred to get off to the thought of being among the very few creatures to have witnessed the end of this pony?

TBH, it would be better if RD died while Big Mac was massaging or listening to the gurgles. Plus the whole "weight suddenly disappearing as digestion takes place" was slightly silly. And lastly, I am still uncertain why the author picked anthro forms for this story... Oh well, it is nice to have more fatal vore content regardless of how good it is...

7713685 hmmm... big mac's reaction wasn't exactly "oh well, whatever", there was regret over the relationship that could have been. All the pleasure they would have shared in their deep, erotic, love interest was snuffed out, even before big mac got to ask the question.

I will agree that his reaction was off, but that's what makes it disturbing and hot. It's as if he didn't have the fetish, but did understand that the girl he had the hots for was now going to be dead. He didn't feel the need to save her even for his own use, suggesting that there must be a deeper reason that he is okay with friends permanently dying. I don't know why, but my intuition goes wild with that. He doesn't even comfort her because he knows she's just fertilizer now and it would be pointless. It gives me an erection to imagine the kind of primal, lizard-brained way that he must be thinking.

If it were me I certainly would have rubbed the belly too, but that's somewhat vanilla for the theme of this story. Also, I do notice that Winona is running on other-worldly physics but I can accept that.

Pinkie seemed rather optimistic about this. I couldn't tell if she was supposed to be sad in some parts or not?

A bit of minus points for that X3.

But that's just cause how I am, I'd have to have an established story somewhere to accept that one friend would just let another get eaten.
xP

Something I'd like to see in future chapters is an internal view and detailed digestion for RD.

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