This story is a sequel to Vampire Night II
The day after Applejack's ordeal Rarity awakens in Limbo and meets a surprising Grim Reaper with an even more surprising offer.
Meanwhile Pinkie learns of Rarity's death and is destroyed by it. But when her reflection offers to help, will it be the kind of help she wants? Or will it be the kind that destroys everything she cherishes?
Cover can be found at source. Posted without permission, if the artist wants me to take it down, just let me know and I'll do it.
Rating warning: There is more blood in this one than in the prequel. It's not much more, but just a head's up.
Chapters (1)
This was an awesome story I started at number three so I must read the other two now thank you for your creative mind.
7679213 Why did you start at number 3? The other two are now spoiled for you forever!
7679737 I wouldn't say they're completely spoiled, just slightly spoiled.
7679944 Well, they would know that Fluttershy and RD were vampires, that AJ was a Were-timberwolf, and that Rarity died last story. Sounds very spoilery to me.
I am huge pinkie pie brony so I often read stories in her section and this creative story popped up and caught my attention so I pulled it up without checking one and two. Which surprisingly easy to get into even at number three. Thank you once again also my mind is a bit of a chaotic mess so it tends to do odd actions.
That. Was.........AWSOME!
7682532 Glad you enjoyed it!
These are well written, solid, and enjoyable. The only problem I have with the Vampire Night series now is the names of the stories. It feels odd having something you read have a number in the title.
7697270 True. I have honestly run into this problem myself, yet I feel it would detract from the series if I gave them a subtitle. I am always open for suggestions, do you have one for this story, as well as it's prequel?
7698033
That is the most frustrating thing for me as a reader. I can't think of a subtitle that would be better. I can ignore how strange it feels, but it still feels pretty lazy. As I said, this is very well written and lazy can only describe the titles.
7698033
Maybe you could use Roman Numerals? That might look a bit better.
7698294 Let me try that, hold on.
7698294 Just changed them, how's that look?
7699063
It's a bit less jarring than having a number in the title. I think it works a little better.
7699916 Then I will keep them like this.
7702432
Earlier today, I was looking through a group and scrolled past this story and thought 'Ayyy I had a hand in that name,' and then it felt weird, and a bit cool to be able to think that.
This was sure interesting romp. Nice to see more of this storyline progress. Though it felt admirably quick. Still for what is presented it is nice.
Though there are lingering threads: such as how is Applejack adjusting to her change, Button Mash's possibly overpowered to broken status special talent, (seriously that has to come with some kind of catch or drawback), Sweetie Belle's feelings of her sister's ultimate fate, and what do the rest of Mane 6 families' reaction to their changes?
Guess that just leaves zombie/lichen, gargoyle, and hunter roles to be filled and we have a set.
Though some those may be filled yet, if what this story might indicating. Is Rarity bound to the gem or she currently latched to It? I think she jumped the gun regarding her assumptions on Button was about to ask. Poor Sweetie and Button are about to die in embarrassment if so. Also is Sweetie Belle's going to be more spritally sensitive thanks to all this ghostly Exposure? Maybe as a Spirit Medium or Channeler? Plus I need that Button Mash's Cutie Mark origin story to be made please.
7876546 I am planning on a fourth and final installment for this series, though I might entertain the idea of side stories when I'm done. The final one will focus on the only pony that hasn't changed.
7877918 Oh I figured. Since it seemed to be heading that way. Question: Is Pinkie a a pony like Tiefling/Cambion now, or a full Tartarus on Equss Demon? Can she shift between between forms?
7878140 Hadn't really thought about it, to be honest. She just seemed like the kind of pony that would become a full demon with no issues. Of course, the reason for all the mane 5's not freaking out and following their animal instincts was because of their connection to the Elements.........Hmm. PCU just got a new idea for story.
7878211 Oh interesting. Speaking of instincts, maybe we could later find out how the Supernatural/Monsterous 5 deal with their newly gained instincts that come with their changed states. Be it everyday slice of life segments, during their usual routines, or against family/friends interactions. Shenanigans would ensue. Be it or good or bad you decide. Also it is becoming increasingly impossible to hide all these drastic supernatural changes or events from the public eye. Bet that is going to cause even more headaches for everyone involved. Heck there might even be some that will try to decry or downplay their previous acomplishments. By saying they simply enforced their powerful influences, causing further distrust & paranoia.
Oh the possibilities.
s c r e a m i n g
Rarity is dating Button Mash. I hate that sentence.
Was he... about to say fillyfooler? Does Button think Sweetie is gay? Wait, no, he was about to say fillyfriend, as in girlfriend.
Ponk... never change.
Sequel bait for a fourth and final fic...?
AM I the only one who want’s a sequel to this?
8873458
No, no you're not.
8874644
So is there one in progress?
8874724
Yeah. I've already got the idea for it and a beginning, as well as an overall plotline.
8874746
Cool, I read all three last night, I have A LOT of time on my hands and I’m A FAST reader.
8874752
In that case, have you checked out my other, completed stories?
8874783
No and they don’t seem to interest me.
8874866
And that's fine. Just thought you might want to read more of my work.
More stories!!! Please!!! Read all three and loved them!!! Now I'm dying to know what happens next, to Twilight, and how Rarity gets on as a ghost....MORE!!! NEED MORE!!!!