After the wedding of Shining Armour and Cadence, tension has been spreading through the land of Equestria. Guards have been doubled and tripled in order to hunt down any remaining changelings still within the borders of Equestria. Status, successfully located and captured a single changeling living within the Everfree Forest. Now he shall stand before the three princesses, Cadence, Luna and Celestia, where he shall await his punishment. But what if, he knew nothing of Queen Chrysalis or even the existence of such an event?
All event happen before the Season 6 finale.
Chapters (1)
What exactly do you have against the Season 6 finale?
7666329 The season 6 finale is good don't get me wrong. It's funny and really innovative. The one major thing that bugs me is with the transformation of the changelings. It might be just me but no me gusta. I always though of changelings as creatures of shadows, but then they turned them into fairy like creatures. It is most likely me, but I don't think I can accept the fact that they are now fairies.
And as I write this comment I start to question if they actually turned into fairies or not :3
7667208 I have to agree that fan made changelings are OP. And thanks :P
7667259 Very nice :D
7667279 You have thought this through very carefully, you sir have done well.
7667431 Not bad at all if I do say so myself.
7666349 Got it. Why are you questioning it?
7669268 Questioning it or questioning what?
7669285 Questioning whether they actually turned into fairies.
7669322 I think they did, just look at them.
7669344 But you said you found yourself questioning whether they did.
7669373 I just have a bad memory, I remember now, they look like deer. Really colourful dear.
7670003 Got it. I think the horns are actually meant to resemble stag beetle horns.
Good 1 shot story
This is a decent story. However, it is very difficult to read because you are constantly switching tenses. Generally, you should pick one tense and stick with it.
It's a great story. You just need to edit it to remove the technical errors.
8089292 Thanks, I'm glad you like it. And you're right, this story is in need of a good look over. Though, it may take a while with all my school, music and other stories I'm working on, but I'll get there eventually.
- King of Eggs
good History!
GET REKT PRINCESSES! MY BROS THE CHANGELINGS JUST DUMPED YOU OVER! YOUR LUCKY HE WAS THERE AND NOT ME! I WOULD'VE BROUGHT YOU INTO LAYERS LOWER THAN HELL!
Wonder how the not guilty verdict will be handled. Can’t imagine ponies will be happy about it.