.......kind sir or madam story was good but .......i was SO CLOSE to.....well ya know .....then the parents came in.........
I WUZ ROBBED!!!!!

oh well story was fun and all looking forward to the aj pinkie story........is it another foot fetish story cause im ok with that

Ha! The ending reminds me of what I did with my story, preventing Button from properly climaxing xD

I'd be cool if you could do another story like this... sort of an alternate ending to the first Equestria Girls movie, when Sunset and Twilight and up alone somewhere and Sunset femdoms Twilight into submission, using her beautiful feet (smothering, trampling, gagging and ultimately foot kissing ) ^ ^

What say you?

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Mwhahahaha! You fell for my trap! And yes I plan for the next one to be foot fetishy too

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I say that's a good plotline; its just a pity im not into Sunlight but id do Twidash with the same plot

7835902 DO IT!

Would love to read more, seriously you wrote this very well :)

“Perhaps you just need a push in the right direction…”

This sentence is 100% Adagio Dazzle approved.