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“We Never Had a Single Fight”

It wasn't all that simple Twilight,
Shining Armor and Twilight Sparkle have their first fight.

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Loganberry

Loganberry #1 · Apr 30th, 2018 · · ·

Fuller review here, but in brief: a potentially cute take on Twilight's claim in "B.B.B.B.F" -- but it's sadly let down by the way you're apparently identifying with Shining. That rarely works with canon characters. He's made to be gay, but then nothing's done with that. Rather a lot of basic technical errors, too. Still has potential, but would probably need to be changed to dissociate story!Shining from real!you.