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Immediately following the occurrence now referred to as "the Metamorphosis", Thorax is now king of an entirely new race... and he only has a small idea of what to do.

This covers the many obstacles King Thorax must now face with his new position- establishing an economy, setting up defenses against the creatures and tribes of the Badlands, and figuring out exactly how his species works now.

It's a lot of pressure, honestly.

(rated Teen because adult themes are discussed)

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 32 )

Hazaa! I was afraid this would be done horribly but instead a got the best ending ever. Spike x Ember and Thorax. At fist I hated Spike x Thorax but now I'm an equal fan so bravo. Two ships that I like where I can decide how it continues. *random applause*

7663289 That was literally the hardest chapter for me to write! i'm glad you liked it!

figuring out exactly how his species works now.

Don't worry, Thorax. The show writers clearly have no idea themselves.

:trollestia:

7663862 To be fair, we only saw them onscreen for about a minute. Maybe season 7 will have something ^.^

7664137 Maybe they'll explain what those things on Thorax' head are.

Male moth antenna would have looked better than pincer-like things that look drawn on by a grade-schooler.

7664592 Well they were glowing in the end bit when the whole group was facing down Chrysalis. Methinks they function like unicorn horns.

7664674 Yeah, but it didn't seem to function like pony horns after his change. Maybe it's just cosmetic now.

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7664679 Yeah, i was honestly confused about that too.

Plus did you notice some of them didn't even have horns after the metamorphosis?

7664690 I did! Though they all seemed to have those wing pod things on their carapace.

Ah well, we'll see what they do with them hopefully next season.

7664690 Oh wait, my mistake. Blame standard definition. Watching in HD, his horn AND antlers glow with magic.

We joked about Twilight getting more wings, but now a changeling has 3 horns! X3

7664797 I fix that in this story. Thorax only has 3 as long as he's in charge. It's a hormonal thing.

7664838 Yo, Prince! Remember me?

Good story, bro!

7665277 So in that last chapter Thorax is, uh, gay for Spike?

If that is what you were going for then...okay, cool stuff. Personally i thought they were just friends, but whatever man. Besides, at least this time Spike being in a gay relationship doesn't involve him being raped by other dragons or some weird crap like that.

Seriously, clopfics need to die in a hole right now so stories like this can occupy the feature box more often.

I liked this story, and i liked your vision of Thorax adjusting to the life and role of a King. I like the other bug-like races you introduce like the cockroach Samsa (did I get that right?) and the new Changelings being called the Aos SI (how DO you pronounce that name exactly?).

I give this story fifty-five Power Stars from Princess Peach's castle out of ten cats riding dogs.

7665430 By that point, Thorax has had 30 years to decide how he felt, but yes, he's gay for Spike

agreed on the clopfics

Yes, you did, and "ay-oss shee"

Thanks!

This THIS is so freaking funny and briliant!!!!! :pinkiehappy:
I realy needed something like this after my weekend.
And the endig is a bonus point :trollestia:

Hmm. Interestingly enough, the Aos Si are a subtype of the Sidthe, or the Fey in Irish and Scottish culture. This seems very interesting!

:twilightsmile: You're actually doing quite well with this. And you brought in my favorite FIMfic story, too! Here's to bright futures! :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Prince_Staghorn deleted Jan 11th, 2017

You literally name fallout wildlife for this chapter

They also occasionally help weed out the more “extremely stupid and stubborn” members of Tricorncupia. By letting them invade.

What will you do if something like this happens in the next episode?

8369289 If anything, it would justify the interaction in this chapter- "we know each other, and we both like Spike, but we're not close friends of each other"

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