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I am not a writer, I am someone who writes. Her name is Derpy Hooves. Han shot first. Applejack is best pony, but Rarity has some of the best lines. I do ride motorcycles. Keep the shiny side up!

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Rainbow Dash struggles to come to terms with her fealings of jealousy and envy on the day of Fluttershy's special event.

Written for FlutterDash writing competition.

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The last paragraph could use a little fine-tuning. But I did like the way the fic hid the ascensions behind the metaphor of weddings.

7616862 Thanks for comment! I appreciate the feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Wait a minute. Pinkie became an alicorn?:pinkiegasp:

HEAD FOR THE HILLS!

7652489 :pinkiegasp: You're heading for the hills???
Let's make it an Over-the-Hill Party then!!!:

Pinkicorn powers: Activate! :pinkiehappy:

I wrote a review of this story in Read It Now #93.

My review can be found here.

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