Days after a tragedy took the life of a friend, Rainbow has to deal with letting go.
This story was created for the third FlutterDash Contest "Change".
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*wipes tear* away sad story but beautiful
7630692 Yes, Fluttershy is dead. Rainbow was seeing her everywhere because she was having trouble letting go. Fluttershy never spoke, and she never interacted with anyone or anything (notice how Rainbow looked at Fluttershy sitting at the EMPTY desk). Rainbow left the grave alone, because Fluttershy literally could not leave. That's what I was trying to say at the end. Sorry if I goofed that up, but I wrote this in 4 hours in the last day of the contest. xD
7631398 you didn't goof up! I am just a stupid cookie! Good job though, I REALLY liked it. You should make a sequel of it about how the main 6 were after that.
7631803 Hey, I deleted your comment so people wouldn't accidentally read that particular bit of info and ruin the story before they read it.
7632523 meh, it's fine, just PLEASE consider it. For me?
This was actually an interesting idea. If it was written in 4 hours, I'd like to see what you could do with it given another chance.
7663113 Probably not much more than I did with it, honestly. xD I'm rather awful as a writer. I can come up with a story, but the actual writing and stuff isn't my strong suit.
I wrote a review of this story in Read It Now #93.
My review can be found here.
7680435 Uh oh. Now I'm scared. O.O On a scale from 1 to garbage, how bad is it?
I searched a whole hour on this site to find a story like this. This is the first one that came up and I just had to read it. It's just all too real for me and I had tears in my eyes. Thank you so much for writing this, it was beautiful.
7904920 While I am glad you liked it, as bad as it is, the fact that you were specifically looking for something like this bodes ill. You must have felt similarly during your own personal event. :(
7910581 I have. Back in 2011 my cousin died and we were very close. Then just recently my best friend ended up havin to have surgery for internal bleeding. I was afraid I was going to lose her. Thankfuly she is alright now and her surgery was successful.