you are what you so eat something sweet :D
Twilight is taking a visit as the Crystal Empire, when she meets Flash, a guard. What she doesn't know, is that she is going to have the trip of a lifetime, for more than one reason...
Twilight has not been a human before. In other words, she has no idea who he is.
I will take down art if requested.
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>>Sky Rocket21
Thanks! Fixed!
And you will see who Belladonna is... But you will have to wait for the next chapter!
>>Sky Rocket21
Yes...well, I think it should be up by late next week, early the week after that. Maybe I will have time to write over the weekend, though...
Hey this doesn't look half bad! I may have to read on but for now I shall leave it at that because I have allot on my own hooves as a writer. Or I guess you could say paws, hands, whatever you like!
I must say that the second chapter title interests me and makes me want to read it! Perhaps did you give Flash a backstory? Flash Sentry that is! If so I am honestly very curious as too what kind of a backstory you have come up with.
I shall read more later. Before I go however.
Twilight is best pony, thank you, keep up the good work.
>>TwiRaptor97xex
Thank you so much for the feedback. Even if you haven't read it. (yet
)
The 2nd chapter is a backstory, but not for Flash. But Flash is in the chapter. But not in the backstory. It's just a play on words.
Thanks for commenting!
~Amethyst Sunset~
7803294 Even knowing now the truth behind the chapter I shall still give the story a read. You will hear from me again soon! Thanks for the quick reply as well because that is a good trait, one that, you don't find much. Alright keep up the good work.
>>TwiRaptor97xex
Thanks!
(also, I need a Flash emoji)
Why would this art be taken down? And why did you make the writing so small?
>>Starlight Nova
It would be taken down because it is not my art. So if the artist downs want the art up there for some reason, I would take it down. It's small because I felt like it I guess.
PS Have you read the story? If you have what do you think?
~Amethyst Sunset~
Hello again! I have gotten around to reading some finally and I must say you are doing very good so far. I do hope you plan to finish the story however and perhaps you have more stories planned? Very good chapter! Keep it up!
>>TwiRaptor97xex
I am in the middle of planning a different story. But I also hope to finish this one too!
That is one bizarre ultimatum.
>>Bluecatcinema
Haha... True.
Thanks for reading + commenting!
~Amethyst Sunset~