After they decided to have lunch, Flash and Twilight cleaned up her mess of books and headed into the streets to look for a place to eat. As soon as they walked out of the library, a random pony ran up to Twilight and screamed: "Everypony, look! It's Princess Twilight!"
Flash looked at the princess. Twilight glanced at him, sighed, then smiled saying, "It is bound to happen. Here we go." Then she braced herself then said loudly, "Flash, I think now would be a great time to go back to the castle, do you think?" She raised her eyebrow.
Flash got the hint. "Sure Twilight! Let go to the castle!" Then he muttered this under his breath, "Lead the way."
"Just go down some random street quickly and quietly. I can't make us both disappear at the same time. I think that would be frowned upon." Twilight whispered.
"Okay."
All of this happened very quickly. The ponies now gathered behind the princess and the guard. A reporter found her way to the front of the now growing crowd. She asked, "Your highness, are you on a date with this guard?"
"Yes." She said, then realizing what she had just muttered covered up her foolishness. "I mean no. No, no, no, no, no. I am not on a date with Flash. He is a guard. He is guarding me. That is all that is happening here."
Flash just stood there, helping her case. The mob of ponies slowly started to die away. But only because Twilight started to walk away, Flash right behind her.
Hey this doesn't look half bad! I may have to read on but for now I shall leave it at that because I have allot on my own hooves as a writer. Or I guess you could say paws, hands, whatever you like!
I must say that the second chapter title interests me and makes me want to read it! Perhaps did you give Flash a backstory? Flash Sentry that is! If so I am honestly very curious as too what kind of a backstory you have come up with.
I shall read more later. Before I go however.
Twilight is best pony, thank you, keep up the good work.
>>TwiRaptor97xex
Thank you so much for the feedback. Even if you haven't read it. (yet )
The 2nd chapter is a backstory, but not for Flash. But Flash is in the chapter. But not in the backstory. It's just a play on words.
Thanks for commenting!
~Amethyst Sunset~
7803294 Even knowing now the truth behind the chapter I shall still give the story a read. You will hear from me again soon! Thanks for the quick reply as well because that is a good trait, one that, you don't find much. Alright keep up the good work.
>>TwiRaptor97xex
Thanks!
(also, I need a Flash emoji)
Why would this art be taken down? And why did you make the writing so small?
>>Starlight Nova
It would be taken down because it is not my art. So if the artist downs want the art up there for some reason, I would take it down. It's small because I felt like it I guess.
PS Have you read the story? If you have what do you think?
~Amethyst Sunset~
>>TwiRaptor97xex
I am in the middle of planning a different story. But I also hope to finish this one too!