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Saomaster1450


Your average run of the mill Pony!

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Twilight Sparkle is your everyday Magic Security employee for MagicSafe, but by night, Twilight is a vigilante hacker that exposes the secrets of ponies doing wrong in the world. Anti social and depressed, it's hard to say if her reality is a good one, but when she starts to get answers to questions she's always asked, she beings the first steps to start waking up equestrians to reality. With evil intents in the background who can Twilight truly trust.

If it wasn't obvious, this is a crossover with Mr.Robot :pinkiehappy:

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

Computer hacker Twilight Sparkle? This sounds great, I'm certainly reading this.

Alright so I just got done with this first chapter, and let me say first off this is pretty good. I like the concept a lot, and the interactions are nicely written, as well as your descriptive stuff. As with most people, the only thing I can say is you need someone to proof-read your stuff. There are A TON of minor grammar and punctuation errors that kind of throw you off the immersion train. Nothing a little time won't fix.

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Yeah, I know what you mean, this was more of a spur of a moment type of thing and this in fact was the result of myself prereading it, glad you enjoyed it though.

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