After feeling the sting of betrayal from her friends at the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight decides to leave Equestria altogether. Twenty years later, she will forge a new empire to combat an even greater foe.
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Nice chapter! I enjoyed it very much.
7793389 Thank you,
I do hope luna and fluttershy join twilight side,
This is a very interesting story , and I hope to see more in the future.
PLEASE MORE MY MIND BEGS FOR IT
Chapter 4 is almost complete, I must warn you guys though that it will be a shocker.
Hey look. Flash isn't being portrayed as a Brad like character!
In all seriousness, good job.
I like this explanation for Luna's absence during the attack. It makes sense and is believable.
The grammar is all over the place, you keep mixing up past and present tense and there are quite a bit of punctuation errors littered across everything. It's not the worst I've seen though, and I do like me some 'badass Twilight Sparkle'. I'm kind of on the fence right now but, I suppose the only way is forward at this junction.
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Trust me my friend, It only gets better.
Ah Luna. Always there.
Oh she is far from alright!
So, Twilight wasn't just going off of Cadence's change in attitude. Then again, there was the change in her magical aura, so I can't see how she didn't notice that.
Once again, Luna is always there when you really need it! I just see one reason after another, why she is the best Princess, all of which i totally agree with! GO LUNA!
So that's where she went!
I thought she was asleep, because you know, sleep schedule.
THATS WHAT ITS CALLED
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Maybe, maybe not. Remember, this is a fanfic. This is how the author interpreted the events so it would fit for the story. Whether this is what happened in the series, we don’t know.