After feeling the sting of betrayal from her friends at the Canterlot Wedding, Twilight decides to leave Equestria altogether. Twenty years later, she will forge a new empire to combat an even greater foe.
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Can't wait to see more.
ohh can't wait to see kmoer this is gonna be good
Honestly, I'm my opinion, try to draw out your scenes more. Your kind of rushing through each chapter.
Other than that good story so far
7787597 Thanks for your reviews, I do appreciate being critiqued. I will do my utmost best to satisfy you the readers.
i guess luna join twilight
Interesting, you caught my attention now I favorite this.
Great story! Keep it up!
When does the next chapter come out?
Good story so far. Hope to see more soon.
Love Twilight’s passion in this. Like!
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So, that was just a dream huh? Well, it was a pretty epic and dramatic dream on that! Loved the way you made Twilight go into her Fire Unicorn Mode like she did in Season 1 Episode 15, 'Feeling Pinkie Keen'! The only thing I think you could've done about that was make Twilight's eyes crimson instead of pure white, though it still added a cool touch nonetheless!
effectively alerting her of your presence there
wait tf jjust a dream
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Sorry, i coudn't resist😂😂😂😂