Not far from Ponyville, deep in the EverFree Forest, standing in a clearing, stood a familiar phoenix looking stallion, the stallion was none other than Ember Phoenix who was regretting the discussion who made a week ago about leaving those mares on their own to fight Nightmare Moon, he knew that if he met any of the members of the royal family especially Princess Celestia then his secret would be out.
As he was in deep thought his body began to change, getting smaller, and his coat getting whiter. As the change stopped a small colt with a pure white coat, red spikey hair with a orange streak going through it, his eye’s were the same before, the eyes of an phoenix, and even his cutie mark had changed as well to one of two phoenix's circling around each other, one was red and the other was orange.
"What the point in hiding who I am now, ma and pa are dead, and sis left to go somewhere nopony can reach her, please come back sunny" His little voice whipered, the colt then began to cry out for his big sister.
However a orange mare hiding behind a tree listened to his plea, and silently cried herself.
Sees update
Cries"FINALLY"
Sees word count
Feints
While it is very short, it is good to see an update for this.
If the name the colt cried is who I think it is, this will get even more interesting.
Is this story dead?
It’s been almost a year from the last update, and even then it was only 200 words