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Okay I will keep it short this time.
One: stay away from Zecora. She is a quite powerful herbalist and has lived long enough under ponies to adapt their culture and habits. Applebloom doesn't seem to suspect anything yet.
Two: like your date with redheart showed, the Suggestion Powder has its limits. Don't try to overstep them. It is a bad idea.
Three: Scootaloo could be a useful ally if you manage to befriend her. I suggest you head to the orphanage and maybe do something about Bird Hoof.
Four: The flower girls have many social contacts. That is both good and bad. They could introduce you to more ponies, but any changes will be noticed quite easily and a smart pony could trace them back to you. Thus you have to be very careful at first. Test your boundaries but be careful. You might have to reverse everything so maybe you plant a trigger to undo everything you did.
LEAVE MY DOMAIN AT ONCE!!!
Yeah, calm down big one. I'm already gone.
fades away into darkness
WHAT? HOW?!
Magic.
Stay away from Zecora and the CMC, for now. Focus on the flower trio and other easy targets first, that Bird Hoof's corruption looks promising. Taking that part time alchemy teaching job will allow you to get close to Miss Cheerilee and give you a valid excuse to practice some of the more complex recipes in the book, plus a second source of ingredients.
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Ahh, finally. It took too long for a connection to be established. But I must say, Zexis, you work fast. Going after Redheart like that seems to have done the trick, but you also need to be careful to not go too fast, or ponies may get suspicious (or even put two and two together, Mandalore forbid).
I agree with a comment on a previous chapter, start having the Flower Trio get used to small suggestions, such as I am never wrong and smaller things of that nature with the spiked tea, and move onto bigger things, like It is perfectly acceptable for ponies to be naked in their own home, and/or even maybe move onto things like You shouldn't hide your body so much, try wearing less restricting clothing in public and work your way from there. You don't want to take forever for obvious reasons, but you also don't want to move too fast from the start. You can already see from your work with Redheart that you can't push it too quickly, but repeated doses and an increase in trust with the treated individual will likely work in your favor.
Finally, I propose attempting to go back into the Library at some point, and attempt to find more things in the Forbidden Zone - there are likely to be more delicious goodies in there to help your quest. Maybe you could attempt to rope Starlight Glimmer into it, even if she doesn't consciously realize that you're doing it - spike her tea or something while waiting in her room at night, and convince her to pull out a few random books that would help your quest and leave them at a certain dead-drop location, all the while not remembering that you had ever talked with her, and make her feel like it is something in her favor to do it instead to help remove any suspicion on her part.
That's all I have for now; I may not send more feedback immediately, but know that I will be watching, analyzing, and critisizing everything that you do - so watch yourself...
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"what is the status on Zexis Relationships?"
"btw who is Bird Hoof?"
It seams that Zecora can see your true nature, you will be need to chance your strategic to be able to take her.
I proposes that you keep your distance from her and also at the same time keep a watch full eye on her, you don't know what she is gone to do with the knowledge she got from you encounter.
"My vote is on the Castle of Friendship"
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Bird Hoof is the actual name of Dirt Hoof, he was mentioned multiple times in the story.
Zexis relationships are viewable at the end of each chapter, if new ones are discovered or old one get updated. I will make a seperat chapter, where all of them a listed, that will be updated regulary.
Zelix, you are my favorite Zebra. You did something g I didn't see coming. You made some suggestions to Nurse Red Heart. Great Job, there, you deserve your own personal glory hole for that.
Also nice job with getting the flower trio, with some tea. Please remember what I said before. Some good suggestions for them are. they like the tea. When they talk to a stallion, their eyes travel to look at his dick. It's perfectly natural for a pony to be naked in their house.. Some interesting reactions were Roseluck's and Daisy's. Daisy is obvious aroused by you. I think she would be the one with the least resistance to the suggestion of having sex with you. I recommend you make a suggestion to her like, t's alright to ask a roommate to fuck you. You're roommates. Roommates are suppose to do favors for eachother.. As for Roseluck, she seems the most understanding. After the other suggestions for her are in place, you can suggest, its natural for a pony to masturbate in their home. Everyone here knows everyone, it's a natural thing.. With this suggestion you can masturbate freely in front of her, may she'll do the same.
I am curious about what suggestions you made to Red Heart. Maybe you should return there some time next week and have a checkup with her. A fun suggestion you may want to give her on your next date is Your patients health is your most important concern. Especially for stallions, you know how easy it is to hurt their dicks and balls. That's why to make sure they are healthy and strong. You always inspect a stallion's dick and balls when they come in..
As for allies, Bird hood seems really sleezy. I don't know if he would be a good partner. You should talk with him. If he shares your values, the he may be a way to spread more of the powder around.
I recommend you go back to the casket of friendship soon. You have to make sure you make a good impression on Twilight. She will be coming by sooner or later to meet you and get to know you. It would be better for you to meet her in her castle than her coming to the flower trio's home and sees what you are doing to them. Also you could continue to befriend spike and maybe talk to him more about Zebra culture. Maybe you could hand him a graphic comic and see how he likes seeing naked mares. Be careful though around Starlight Bitch. She knows mind control spells but not the good kind. She's makes mindless slaves, and we don't want that. We want everyone to act like themselves, just more in touch with there sexual appetites.
I got another idea for you to use the powder. We need to test the second delivery method, and I have an idea for that. But you are going to need to corrupt three ponies first. Aleo, Lotus, and Bulk Biceps. If you corrupt them, you can add the powder to mud baths, steam rooms, or jacuzzi's. From there all you would need is some "tradition zebrica music," you donated for the spa. For males, the music would hide suggestions of, "Confidence, a libido boost, and ego boost." Those would even turn a well mannered stallion into a corrupt stallion wanting to fuck mares. As for the suggestions mares could get I suggestion, "libido boost, submission, and continued random those of stallions thrusting into their pussies."
Be careful Zelix. You got some power now. Test it and use it. Corrupt the flower trio, corrupt Redheart. Remember to visit Spike at the Friendship Castle. Go to guys night. Try and corrupt the spa ponies. But beware of Zecora and Starlight Glimmer. You aren't ready to take them on yet.
Also beware. A pink pony will be trying to give you a party soon. Don't ogle the Mares too much. But maybe Pinke would be willing to give you a personal part soon.
Looking over the options, the shadowy figure steps forward.
"Though I'm not as pleased to note that most of my suggestions with altering plants with your magic haven't been tested, I am still pleased with what you've accomplished so far. But, then again, it's understandable that you've been busy. In due time, eh?"
With a shrug, he then motions towards him.
"My suggestion is to just test it little by little as you travel. There's countless plants along the way. And... I'd suggest you have a look at the Orphanage in regards to the new options."
For the heck of it, the shadowy figure sits indian style in mid-air as he motions with a hand, putting his elbow on his lap. "It may seem tedious, but by showing your 'care' for kids, you can get a positive rep. And by getting the aid of the kids there, you can have allies through the most... unlikely of sources, since so few expect big issues with kids as anything more than kids doing as kids do."
Zexis, you should find a way to contaminate the main water supply, without it being to obvious. My suggestion is to find a way to nullify the strong flavor of the Suggestion Powder, but not any of the affects. If you do that then any one you come across would be easier to manipulate to your bidding.
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Seems pretty clear Bird Hoof is the source of Scootaloo corruption and lust stats, and maybe she is not the only one in the orphanage. His high depravity, low willpower and dirty little secrets would make him a potential partner/pawn, but it´s better to sound out him first carefully. If indiscreet, he may become a liability.
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Well thing are starting to get interesting I see. You did excellent work with Nurse Redheart but be careful how you word your suggestions to her we do not want her to act to unusual around her friends and those who know her. I recommend that you link your previous suggestion to her to surface when she is alone with you as a safety precaution, we can get rid of them later when we have more secure power base.
Now about our Zecora problem, for now leave her be we are not strong enough yet. However, we will need to reassure Applebloom after she saw how Zecora reacted to us I would recommend that you tell her that you and Zecora come from two tribes that use to fight a lot and that some resentment remains between the tribes. Hopefully these will set her mind at ease and you can suggest that she should not talk to Zecora about you cause it will only upset her further.
Th job at the school is a good opportunity we should look into it we most definitely could use the extra bits and can secure more ingredient for our potions. It would also make us look extremely good to the community cause every one trusts teachers right.
Now lastly I recommend going to the Orphanage we need to know more about Bird Hoof and see if we can make him into a pawn. Notice I say pawn and not ally,He already has a reputation for being creepy and we don't want to be associated with that in these early stages, but if we could get something to blackmail him with he would be a good pawn and as we grow in power he will become a willing pawn when we show him the rewards for serving us loyally. It also my be a chance to get Scootaloo to like us more, if she changes her attitude towards us then it would reassure Applebloom and once again stem any repercussions that may occur due to her seeing how Zecora acted towards us.
From the Archives of Enlightenment, Forbidden Division
The sound of a tine echo's across an ancient cavern.
A clawed hand taps the water and the sound is made to a rhythm.
As it taps an image is made and changes until it shows a particular male zebra, and the figure grins.
"I must say your efforts are indeed showing progress and you have done well to test your capability for control over another mare, but Zecora may be a problem if she warns Applebloom of your intent." The Ancient One pause and its grin spreads. "However, the girl did show you the way to her homestead,I feel that an excellent opportunity for handling the shamaness is now open to you. As she lives far from conventional living she may need to wash her clothing and bed-spread in a primitive manner and may leave them out to dry on a line but while they are still wet apply the powder to her clothing."
The figure stops moment and thinks of mortal habits
"Now keep in mind this method is to be best used in the late afternoon, an optimal time to gather herbs and perform this task and to offer not only an opportunity for you but for Applebloom as well. Find Zecora's reasons for limiting her training and suggest she provides more training to the young mare as well as being more trusting of you, then if the chance arises tell the young one to ask."
The light from the moon catches the image of Zexis in the water and begins to fade from sight. The Ancient One snarl in frustration, knowing time is short hastily observes the avatar's schedule. " If i were to give some advice on your time I would say go to the orange filly's homestead after work, then to the schoolhouse, then to the forest for supplies and plans, and finally on to the "guys night'. It will hopefully be a long and productive day if all goes well..."
The image fades completely from the water.
A claw grips a metal deposit tightly until it begins to melt in its palm.
A frown turns to a grin, and angered breathing turns to a dark chuckle.
Cursed Monks! *sigh* there are days I was had my body OR SOMETHING to attach my head to! Well at the very least I am kept in this plush box and not out in the blasted catacombs with the rest of the monks "Followers" Bah I am merely here to avoid my enemies....I suppose like a good idea at the time. Ah I am rambling.
Ah Zexis do despise criticism particularly if it is constructive, of course, insults should punished if only in a creative way. Part of me would suggest you should pick up a paddle of sorts I digress. While it is true that the flower trio have many social contacts a tract with the one known as Sweetie Belle might be of interest as well as not only is her sibling a member of the elements and fashion designer, which mean many other contacts.....you could perchance offer to give the young Belle lessons in cooking.
Hmmmmm......an idea for latter much latter you learn a new trade in working with fabrics.
Oh I am going off in a tangent. All and all you've been quiet productive might I suggest on occasion you could volunteer at the hospital once you have more influence on Red Heart. She could assist in 'Nursing' the that are ailing with a few remedies.
well I must be going I hear the foot steps of the those damnable monks like to add another follower to there flock.
'A Priority one Transmission coming in'
*The mirror emits a crackle, and a blacked out bipedal form appears.*
Congratulation, agent of corruption. Your work with Nurse Redheart is beyond my expectations.
From this point on, our analysis is there are two paths before you. These paths have been assigned to code names 'Monarchy' and 'Democracy' respectively.
Path 'Monarchy' is to visit Princess Twilight Sparkle.
Path 'Democracy' is to visit the Orphanage.
Both paths have their advantages.
'Monarchy' lets you immediately be introduced to a princess, which is not to be taken lightly. She would be the pony anyone who has a problem with you, would go to. Even if you do not corrupt her immediately, having a rapport with her would be quite useful in such a serious. However, this path is not without risks. The fact is, she is in communication with Princess Celestia,and is an Element of Harmony. Even letting her leak some minor worries into a letter could lead to Princess Celestria's immediate response. Of course, this may be useful once you have been suitably empowered. Being able to prepare for Princess Celsestia, may make the difference between success, or failure. Once you did have both Princess Celstria and Pincess Twilight, Luna would be an easy target. Once you have the ruling majority, the ponies under their rule would be quickly ... convinced, of the truth of our ways.
'Democracy' is a much slower force. While 'Monarchy' allows you to quickly issue a coup de grâce against the puritan godly beings that rule Equestria, 'Democracy' converts the common folk. By visiting the orphanage, you are able to reach the ignored youth of Ponyvill. If while you were meeting with the headmaster of the orphanage,you could arrange for you to 'volunteer' to help out. This action allows you some unsupervised access to the young fillies, and improves your reputation throughout the town. If you could partner this with the job opportunity as a substitute teacher, you would have plenty of time to stow our corrupted seed. Literally or metaphorically, as I am sure that your body is begging to find release.
Of course there is a problem with this course of action. There is only so much time in a day, and juggling your work at the flower shop, a job as a substitute teacher, and volunteer work would be difficult. Perhaps you could start giving a few 'lessons' to the flower-trio so that you could have more time off? I am sure that you could find a way to balance it all.
"Vote for Orphanage"
Zexis, things are going well.
Even if you are still a bit to patriarchal for my tastes you are doing better than when we began.
There is something that you should know that will help you with corrupting ponyville. Happiness, and then specifically the happiness of those that you have corrupted. If they enjoy the changes you make to them why would they even want to stop you.
You already have a great tool to show others the way into our embrace. The right suggestions with that potion will do wonders. One of those suggestions could be you are happy when you do as I say, or saying “you are happy with the changes I made to you” at the end of a session. Ensuring that they are happy with everything that you do to them will make things a lot easier and they may even help you with bringing others into our embrace.
Good luck Zexis, and remember we will be watching
Bah. I knew getting Zecora involved this early would be a mistake. Stay away from her for now, Zexis. She has a higher standing with the locals than you, despite her being a just a bitch. The Flower Trio shows that the ponies here might mistrust you simply for being a zebra stallion; all the more reason to make some friends and look better in the eyes of Ponyville.
While we're on that... Zexis, you've now visited the schoolhouse and saw the deplorable state its student body is in. Fortunately, an opening as an alchemy teacher is just the right way to get involved! As others have noted, you need to make sure you have the time for it. For that, you will need to contact the local teacher. We hear she is quite a hottie, with a high chance she is single to boot. Careful about getting too close though, it's possible she wants to be with the giant red stud you met not long ago.
Talk to Cheerilee about this teacher position. How much time it'll require, whether you'll be supervised, if all the students will participate or only some... And, Zexis, keep in mind Apple Bloom is a bit of a potion maker herself! She will be a valuable resource in this. In fact, ask her about any students to watch in particular.
We have it on good authority that there are two especially bitchy students in Cheerilee's class, named Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. They're rich, popular, pretty, and they might think themselves too good to learn from a stallion, or a zebra, or a zebra stallion. Their families also rarely care what trouble they get into. If you see them bully two unicorn colts, a fat and a skinny one, consider that they are merely expressing attraction towards them; an attraction they can't openly show in a backwards, restrictive society as Ponyville. So, they bully the boys to get their attention and try to goad them into dominating and punishing them. It's rather tragic how they have to resort to such games, isn't it?
It'll be so much better once you helped them. Think about their happy faces once they give their bodies over to Snips and Snails!
Also, you want to know more about Scootaloo and her caretaker. Visit the orphanage, find out what's going on there. Maybe Bird Hoof already has the right idea how to train mares. Either way, he is key to getting to Scootaloo and her misplaced dislike of you.
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I must commend you. Your idea to get back at Redheart worked wonderfully! Zexis should adopt your explanation why Zecora reacted so strongly towards him as well. Apple Bloom has to be put at ease after witnessing that, and a history of tribal conflict should work. The locals seem to think all manner of things about zebras at it is.
Methinks the Flower mares may need to be punished for that at some point. They'll surely be more open to Striped Ones after they got a few stripes put on their backsides.
7591838 In that we are in agreement.. Starlight would make a good minion as she already has experience at tricking and controlling large groups of ponies and is skilled at creating spells! Maybe she can create a variation of the Cutie Mark Removal spell that enslaves ponies to our main force of evil here..
That Bird Hoof is bad news.
It's obvious he's one of those, "Sink lower then even the devil himself types" and therefore isn't someone we wanna be friends with... buuuut, he may still be of some use.
Perhaps making him your punching bag on the grounds of "Saving" his charges might help win them, especially Scootaloo, and most of the town to your side.
But first! We must make sure we have valid reason to do so. It's not gonna end well if you go charging in acting the hero only to learn his only problem was that he just didn't bathe or something.
This calls, FOR RECON!!!
%Begins flipping through files%
CRUD!!! Nothing!
%Slams files cabnit%
Ok we need that info if we're gonna make this work Zex, so get on it or else we can kiss Scoots plot goodbye!
AND NOT IN THE GOOD WAY!!!
Zexis.. I suggest we go to the Castle of Friendship, there we can start the process of corrupting the princess, her Student, and Spike! Plus If we start becoming friends with Twilight she might have more in depth info for us on that troublesome Zecora...
P.S Keep up the good work on that Redheart bitch...
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Not to mention she is simply too dangerous not to be put on a tight leash. Especially with that attitude. Princess Twilight is courting disaster by not forcing some addtional manner of control upon Starlight, and only her dragon assistant seems to understand that this isn't working out well.
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Hmm. Do you think Spike should be put in charge of one of them? They're both powerful and valuable resources. Maybe too valuable to give away. Then again, Spike deserves some hot piece of ass for all his troubles.
Should we consider hitching him up with Sweetie Belle instead?
7596390 Definitely give him Sweetie Belle, and perhaps Starlight as well, with the attitude she gave him I'm sure he has some ideas for 'punishment' Twilight is debatable but as long as I get a steamy couple of sex scenes with her being controlled, well then I'll be satisfied!
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You make a good point about Spike possibly having the right ideas how to properly punish Starlight Glimmer. Maybe the other Watcher was right and Zexis should look into buying a few paddles. They'll make a great gift for the friends who've come around to seeing things his way...
castle of friendship
I think we should have Zexis activly seek out Discord before the gathering, knowing the few gods of chaos that actually exist in the several dimensions I have seen, Discord is already aware of everything that's happening.
He needs to know we are not simply taking over Equestria to destroy it, but building a better Equestria, and with his help it will be better.
Everyone is always dancing around the subject of Fluttershy with him, I think we may be surprised that, in reality, Discord may already be on our side and has already begun corrupting Fluttershy himself.
He may be planning the very plan we are, and when he discovers this, we can form an alliance to control the corruption of Equestria together.
Besides, who's to say Discord hasn't been leaving suggestions in the corruptor himself?
If you gone give Spike a mare, give him a little older mare. He seams to like mature mare.
7597272 Hmm.. perhaps using his skills Zexis could easily make some.. 'unique' paddles that not only help punishment but also help his cause.. surely there are some woods out there and plants he can mix into them that help to reaffirm his plans!
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Hm. Do you think Starlight counts as old enough? To be frank, the idea of Spike visiting some payback on her, young-stud-style, is rather appealing.
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Ohohoh! Now that's an interesting idea! A paddle that integrates his plant-based skills. Yes, I can see that. And if a paddle is too complex—for now—he could try to grow a special kind of birch first.
Really, Zexis, isn't that what you heard some of the witch doctors back home do? Try to remember. Some of them grow their own punishment rods, like a cane, or a birch, or even a paddle. They grow them from special plants and enchant them to help them keep their zebra bitches nicely horny and obedient. You're the son of a witch doctor, aren't you? Well, maybe you need to look into creating one of those things for yourself!
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What I meant is that Spike seams to like older mare like Rarity, Octavia, Twilight and so on. But he also seams to like lady like mare, you know like Rarity, Octavia, Fleur, Sassy Saddles and so on.
(the reson I made the other comment is because I saw that many want Sweet Bell and I have seen so many Spike and Sweet Bell shipping that it start to get old. I mean the 3 common Spike shipping is Rarity, Sweet Bell and one of the other CMC. what I say is it start to get old and I want to see something new).
7601277 I agree! Glad someone else is as devious as I am!!
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You have a point there. Spike enjoys the more mature mares—not necessarily older, but more refined, more ladylike. Though perhaps it's also simply a case of attractiveness. Rarity is, after all, a bombshell.
Heh, we should hope Dragon Lord Ember decides to visit. She'd be a wonderful gift for him as well.