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This was a cool chapter.
The screen flickers, and a beautiful maiden in a silk purple nightgown appears. She was sitting at a desk, books laying across with notes sticking out of them. Her hair was a deep black, with matching cat ears and tail, the latter twitching slightly as the only sign of her annoyance.
"Well, that event could have certainly gone better. We've been ignoring Zecora far too long. I'll have to make plans about her." Her annoyance fades as she turns to the screen.
"Greetings Lord Eros. I am Lady Catherine, though I hope you will forgive me for desiring to keep most of my identity a secret. I don't desire universe travelers to come pounding at my door one day. Anyway, my questions involve the history of Equestria. I am curious about the Crystal Empire. If my knowledge is correct, Sombra's reign was after Discord's so the Empire should still have been there at the time of your invasion. I'm guessing you had plans for it that never came to fruition and I wish too hear them. In fact, I'm interested in what you had in mind for Celestia as well.
"My second question is about Griffonstone or whatever the name of the griffon land is called. I swear the name changes every universe. So did you do anything to the griffons before your imprisonment?
"Anyway, my final question is Zebrica. You have already stated that you had corrupted it so my interest has been piqued. I'm aware this is a lot of questions but the author's comment on worldbuilding got me thinking, so feel free to answer only one of my questions. If you do, I suggest you tell us about Zebrica as that knowledge could help our Zebra avatar. Thank you for your time Eros."
The maiden, now known as Catherine, went back to her books as the screen flickered off.
Hm. Zexis didn't want to tackle the issue of Timber Wolves yet... but Zecora apparently has some pull over them. Makes sense, how else would she be able to live in that forest if unless she has a way to stay safe amongst the many beasts?
No matter. We'll sort it out. Eventually.
Eros! I would have words with you!
First, are there any descendants of your time as Equestria's Premier Patron of Perversion? Looking back at your reign, most mares ended up very, very pregnant. I know of daemons and fiends who nurture pet families, sometimes with a drop of their servants' or even their own blood mixed in. Is there somepony like that in Equestria still? Are there any descendants of the founders you corrupted? We might find ways to activate whatever taint you left them with.
Related to that, you claimed your magic played a part in turning the Everfree into what it is now. If that's true, how much of it was seeded by you? Can you think of ways to capitalise on this fact? If that idiotic Draconequus did one thing right, it was to increase his power by letting it twist and corrupt his domain.
On to other topics... Changelings. They feed on love, and I bet they could easily feed on lust and domination/submission. They're your creations, aren't they? You had a hand (or another bodypart) in their genesis, I'd bet. Am I right? They're still running rampart across this world. They could see your new creation as a threat. We need to know what you can tell us about them.
Lastly, a personal matter.
There is a world parallel to this. Or perhaps it's a dimension, rather than a world. Somepony, an old ally of the princesses whom you might have known in person, created a doorway there: Starswirl the Bearded.
He took something from me. Three somethings, to be exact. I may want them back at some point. And I know for a fact that he put them in this little rubbish bin dimension of his. So, what do you know of mirror portals to different worlds? Specifically, to retrieve something from them?
That's all for now. Perhaps I should visit you, some day. We could play a game. I should warn you, though—I don't lose. The only being to whom I lose, neither of us wants involved in this.
Another good one.:D
Interesting as always.
Eros, I must ask, what is it you favor as a general tactic, grabbing the light in the room and ensuring all see you as you work them right in front of their nose, to simply keep to the shadows and move things, or do you like to play the middle and shift the attention to a pawn, while you play the game, Or do you have your own ideal tactics that I can't think of or explain? Information is always a worth while goal.
If oyu dont mid nanother one while am at it, what do you think of the current achivments of your Avatar, do you think he'd be further along, is he right on track, or do you think he is being too slow?
One orange and one blue light come on highlighting a figure in shadow who sighs.
"These recent events in the Everfree are a cause for concern. Sadly this may be beyond our ability to deal with right now. More consideration will be needed.
"Regardless, greetings once more, Lord Eros. I hope you are... as well as can be expected. To business."
He sighs for a moment before slamming his hands to the desk before him. "What in the name of all things holy happened back there? Can you give any possible explanation for these... ghosts!? Apparitions? What have you? Or at least a manner in which to fight them? We were lucky we had Applebloom's staff handy! Who are you going to call for this sort of thing!?"
He sighs and moves his hand to straighten something at his neck. Pulling his chair forwards a slight outline of his business suit can be seen. "I apologize for my outburst, but I am always... annoyed by something I cannot fight, directly or not. Discord is the most notable issue, but these ghosts concern me greatly.
"Another question to ask is what was Celestia and Luna like before your... incursion? Are these purity laws something they would have come up with on their own before you arrived? I think it's plausible that her... overly strict laws might be a result. It is very possible you have made her afraid.
"Lastly, if we can corrupt Ponyville and keep it under your thumb what are your plans? To move onto another city like Manehatten.. Or move on Canterlot? I imagine striking the capital before we are ready to be a folly. Not that we are ready to keep Ponyville in our grasp, regardless."
The lights shut off.
"We... will be watching."
8085515 Another option is to play the Mane Six against Zecora... but the Magic of Friendship is a thing here, and that could backfire horribly. That said, sure, Big Mac could pound Zecro's face into a mush. Can he punch ghosts into a mush? Because there might be more where they came from.
This is not a fight we want to pick yet.
That said having allies go were Zexis can't is a good idea, but Birdhoof has only proven that he isn't completely useless, I'm not sure how much Scootaloo can handle, and Thunderlane still needs to be brought into the fold.
That said, I have been advocating for combat-usable abilities for awhile now, simply for matters of self defense and in the event things go very wrong... Which sort of sums things up now.
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Zecora likely has combat skills as well. You have seen her headstand on her staff, no? Her body control is remarkable.
She can probably be overcome if Zexis manages to catch her off-guard. Meaning that Big MacIntosh has to catch her off-guard. And Birdhoof too. He proved himself in a real fight just now. Without his intervention, Zexis would've been maimed by the Timber Wolves. We should not ignore that.
In fact, seeing as how Birdhoof proved relatively adept during battle, might it be worth looking into having him build upon that? We all know equines aren't natural fighters. Yet he didn't flail about in a panic, he worked together with Zexis as an effective team, even being eager for more afterwards. We might have discovered a valuable skill in Birdhoof nobody even suspected.
8085751 Hmm. That's something to consider. I was going to advocate that we reward Birdhoof for his backup, but I hadn't thought of his combat abilities. Keeping his work out regime high and maybe finding a basic combat spell, or a spell with a combat application, would help matters greatly.
Zecora might be no slouch in a fist fight, but I think we can agree that a fist fight is preferable to what else she can do.
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Agreed. Having a trained, eager, loyal attack Unicorn on our side will only be helpful. Zexis can do a lot, but combat telekinesis is out of his reach. Birdhoof works well together with him and his skillset rounds Zexis' out nicely. Never mind the surprise effect: Who in Ponyville would ever expect sleazy, slobby, chubby Birdhoof to actually be dangerous? They probably all believe he's a useless coward.
He should also get a reward, as you noted. If he were the coward ponies believe him to be, he would've left his master Zexis behind and fled. He stayed and fought, side by side.
8085788 A night or two with Scootaloo might do it.
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I would advise against that. Zexis already declared her off-limits. Going against that now only sends mixed signals. Minions and pets don't do well with mixed signals, they need a somewhat stable framework. Let him look for another toy for Birdhoof's personal use instead.
Or better yet, have Scootaloo suggest one!
8085813 Point.
Maybe Applebloom once corrupted?
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As "payment" for Birdhoof helping save her. Lovely!
Though, I am curious whom Scootaloo will suggest. We won't know for a while.
The mist rolls back revealing an emerald color dragoness with jade colored breast scales waking though one of the entry ways of the castle.
“Wow, that is unexpected.” The dragoness sighs “To be honest that was dumb, actually getting into a figh”
“I’m home!!!!!!” A shout echoes throughout the caverns. Turning her head, she see the blue dragon with white chest scales, entering the caves. Filing into the hallway numerous guards enter in, smiles on their faces. A large nude black dragon, with grey scales bows to the dragon.
“My Lord Fimbulwitner! Welcome home.” The dragon speaks.
“Yes, Welcome home.” The green dragoness speaks as she traces a claw of the Ice Dragon Lord’s bulging bicep, while the other grips on the firm blue ass cheeks.
“Rally it in for a moment Fluorspar.” The blue dragon’s baritone voice trembles, his cock starting to rise.
“There was no one remotely sexy at the monastery. I was able to help them embrace the ways of Eros, but I’m not into saggy breast and aging lips. And definitely not limp dicks.”
The black dragon’s eye ridges raise, “Odd choice of words. Is there a reason to why to added the last part?”
Sighing Fimbulwinter answers, “Obsidian, it’s because of.”
A loud crash echoes through the hall as an adult dragon comes chagrining in. His green scales are the same color as the eyes, as he is opening gawking at the guards and drooling. A huge tree being held in the dragon’s claw.
“Him.” Fimbulwinter sighs. “Apparently, he loves the other side of the nest and went to the monastery to cure himself. Once he fully came to terms what he wanted sexually, he couldn’t stop drooling at me, or beg or my cock.” The blue drake shakes his head. “Obsidian, please make sure this dragon waits in one of the rooms, while I talk to Fluorspar.”
Feeling the dragoness’s claws squeeze in on his ass, the drake shivered. Desire growing in his eyes, but determination keeping the passion from growing out of control, “Sorry Fluorspar, no sex yet. I need to talk to you and a guest about certain issues, and then I need to hear the captain’s report.”
The claw leaves his ass, as the green dragoness pouts indignantly, “Are you sure, there not enough time for a quickie.”
“If I get this all done within an hour, I’m throwing a whole wide castle orgy.” The Northern Dragon Lord speaks with conviction.
The green dragoness smiles. “Alright, let’s go into a private room, and get this done quickly.”
“Thanks.” The blue dragon lord sighs. “Obsidian, place that dragon into a guest room and lock it, so he doesn’t get out, but let him keep that tree he has dropped on the ground.
“Tree?” The dragoness smirks.
“He uses it as a dildo.” Fimbulwinter sighs.
The green dragoness and the blue dragon enter a room down the hallway while listening the green dragon speaking to the guards, “So you guys must be the guards. I’ve been a naughty drake, anyone here want to punish me.”
As the two enter the room, Fluorspar starts laughing. “HA HA HA HA What? HA Ha What did you do to that poor drake back there?” Fluorspar finally stops laughing but continues to snicker.
Sighing the dragon lord speaks, “That dragon, Merry Beryl, yeah that’s his name, really got me mad.” A sad look crosses his face, “Do you remember? I said that I lived at the monastery, that is where I learned how to flesh craft.”
“Yeah, I remember,” the dragoness smirks, “You said you had to go there, to get better at it, so you can finally give Tiger Agate a dick, just like Eros, told you.” The dragoness smiles, though while subtly jutting out her tits so Flimbulwinter can see their size and perkiness. Fimbulwinter’s cock starts to raise as his gaze soon locks on to those f size tits.
“Yes. I left that monastery after I found a book on Eros, and that book was burned by those dragons. It was that dragon, Merry, who ordered for its burning and even did it himself. Now I was naturally pissed at him. He robbed me of more information about Eros, when I was younger. But when I was corrupting him, finding out why he tried so hard to be celibate, I found out he burned the book because he loves the other side of the nest. He wanted to be fucked by manly dragons with big cocks and muscles, but he was so deep in the denial that he would have done just about anything to get rid of that idea, especially anything to sex in general. When I found this out, got it directly from his mind, he would even admit it verbally, I was so mad, that some of my anger may have affected his corruption. I honestly think I got him a torture or punishment fetish now.”
“How can you be so sure.” Fluorspar asks curiously.
Fimbulwinter’s gaze returns to her face with a deadpan stare. “You try having a dragon appear in your bed every night since his corruption begging for his punishment, while thrusting his ass in your face! If it was a dragoness I would have taken him. You know I personally only find dragonesses sexy.”
Fluorspar lightly jab, “So you’re sure you don’t want to try the other side of the nest.”
Fimbulwinter smirks, “You know I personally don’t care who a dragon or dragoness wants to fuck. It can be male, female, a family member, a rock, even a polar manticore if it fits your fancy, but if I don’t want to join in on that sex personally don’t force me to participate.”
Fluorspar asks, “So what are you going to do with him?”
Fimbulwinter scratches the back of his head, “I was honestly hoping you know one of our soldiers or nobles that prefer that side of the nest. Otherwise I don’t know what to do.”
“Aren’t you lucky, I threw my lot in with you all those years ago.” The green dragoness smirks, “I happen to know that Zircon Core, yeah the Court Sorcerer don’t make that face at me, likes either side of the nest.”
“Really, but I’ve only see him with dragoness, he even participated in several orgies and he fucked dragonesses, I’m sure of that.”
“Trust, me.” Fluorspar repeats, “He hides his sexual preferences from before you came because of how Permafrost would be mad when a dragoness refused his advances because she only wanted another dragoness. Sure, he got scolded by his father, but he always had it out for dragons who liked the other side of the nest, because of that. So, Zircon kept it secret, and when you took over, with your countless orgies with dragonesses, he feared you would be the same.”
“You know that is ridiculous, I personally don’t mind if he fucks, or gets fucked by a dick or cunt, just don’t bring me into it.
Fluorspar gently rubs Fimbulwinter’s massive pecks, “Good, Libra, the goddess of fairness, will be happy to hear that, I’m sure. She may even give you a blessing as well, besides from Eros.”
“Eros, oh yeah! He’s listening in on this, isn’t he?” Fimbulwinter’s eye ridges raise as he realizes who is watching.”
Kneeling into a prayer Fimbulwinter speaks, “Eros, God of Corruption and Lust, thanks for the blessing upon my kingdom, that I may be able to bring dragons back towards our true natures, and not those of the sun tyrant. May my pleas reach you as I ask you about the concern I have for my kingdom.”
“Firstly I must apologize for not corrupting Tiger agate yet, but I needed more skill. I have now gotten that, and will start on her corruption.”
“Do you approve of my idea for Merry Beryl. I hope that it may actually prove useful and stop rebellions from using dragons who prefer the same sex, since they would learn I don’t have a problem with that. If you know of a different path for me to take, with concerns for this dragon please tell me.”
“Finally, as you may have observed, I was able to allow the dragons of the Fang Monastery to embrace their sexual natures and traits that they have bottled up for so long. They are extremely grateful for this liberation. Though one dragon, one of my old mentors, asked in earnest if you Eros have had any dealings with dragons in the past. He, and I, don’t care if it is with the dragons of the south, east, north, or the lost dragons of the west. We both would like to know your dealing with dragons if you have had any.”
“Thanks for your blessing, I hope that I may continue to have your blessing as I help untie my kingdom and bring dragons back into your hoard.
The blue dragon stands up, and looks over at the tranquil sitting dragoness. “Fluorspar. Call the other dragoness, we are having an orgy in thirty minutes.”
The mist closes in as the two dragons leave the room, both are moving quickly and dripping with signs of arousal at the idea of a full castle orgy.
The mist rolls back to reveal a very ticked dragon Lord
"It looks like I have to address you guys before my orgy. I haven't had sex in over 3 weeks. I'm not happy. I just got back from my latest QUEST8085896, to find that Zelix is about to fight Zecora. Listen you guys. From what I have learned, never underestimate your opponent. Even when they are down, they can still pull thinks around.
For example I have my greatest enemy captured and chained in my dungeon, and he still got a spy in my palace. With that in mind down underestimate Zecora. It looks like in the next chapter, due to this choice, Zelix is going to fight. Our biggest advantages are Big Mac and that pendant, though I hate holy magic! Pesky little shit pieces. Anyway the best thing for Zelix to do is for use to prepare with a battle potion or two, something to distract Zecora, and have Mac give the beat down. Maybe even corrupt Big Mac thoroughly as he punishes Zecora for hurting his sister. But we must be careful. If Zecora spills the beans she didn't then that anger can be directed to Zelix.
So to recap, prepare, distract, have Mac deliver the blow or corruption, and make sure to gag that Zebra.
The mist rolls, in as he speaks, "Its time now, BYE!!"
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Well, you have 6 CP to spend. And who knows? Maybe some useful traits will appear...
In general, this the point where specialization vs. Jack-of-all comes in. You have a basis now, how do you wanna proceed?
And when it comes to plans, remember that Zexis is an intelligent stallion, so he will come up with something on his own. If you want him to be cleverer than boosting that trait is an option. Or you can whisper him some battleplans of your own...
Well fuck. Looks like we fucked up with Thunderlane. Let that be a lesson to you Zexis, you can't pester people about their secrets, even pussies like Thunderlane have enough pride to tell you to fuck off. On the other hand, it's Thunderlane so who fucking cares?
Question time:
So how accurate are Zexis memories of Zebrica?
Do the alicorns have some sort of divine magic/power? Can we use alchemy to tap into that?
And most importantly; how do we break new mares without making it so damn obvious? Or making them so dependent on us. Can we corrupt them without breaking them?
*Static fills the screen but slowly dies out and shows a large library with a tall robed figure wearing a spiked heart shaped mask with large yellow eyes staring at the screen, (or maybe you?), other robed figures, all with different masks, appear and disappear behind him carrying books and other objects.*
"Finally." The creature wearing the heart shaped mask speaks in relief. "You would not believe how long it took to find your world out of the infinite number of duplicates that have either already failed, or have a fetish for rather, bleh, disgusting habits." He, for it is a male voice you hear, shudders in disgust at the memory. "While not my preference, I can understand why some beings might enjoy sadism, masochism, and/or bondage. But watersports, really?" He whispers, more to himself then you.
"Anyway, little intro to be nice. I see that you know somewhat about the Archives of Enlightenment. You can think of me as something similar. I enjoy collecting and reading stories about, and from, multiple worlds. The beings behind me are replicates of myself I created that help keep everything organized. But back to the point, I had been reading a different version of your current game of conquest, unfortunately that version of Zexis that had been created tried to fuck both Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer senseless but forgot to take proper precautions first.
In an amazing twist, while he did turn them both into sluts, their combined hidden libido turned out to be to much for him to handle and ended up with a bad case of death by Snu-Snu." The mask starts shaking as chuckles can be heard. "Either way, that was the end of that story and I wanted to see if it could have gone another way. While you seem to still be in the starting phase of Ponyville's corruption compared to the version I spoke of, Lord Eros. You have also taken different routes and choices."
The masked figure places his hands together in a non-threatening gesture. "While I can not guarantee that any advice I may or may not offer will be good, I do have an idea you may think about should you succeed in your conquest. First though you should treat Zexis like a son, maybe make him your second in command/right hand man whatever. You are basically his father after all, plus if he frees you, you'll owe him quite a bit.
The idea, you see, runs on the fact that nothing lasts forever, even if you were to win there is a chance that others may one day overcome you. Hence where my idea fits in. Should you succeed, perhaps put a part of yourself inside Zexis. That way, should you be sealed away once more you would have an agent on the outside that could free you, without having to go through all the hassle of creating a new avatar."
The figure shrugs. "Course this idea may not work depending on your world's laws of magic. But still, always nice to have a backup pla-" The creature is interrupted by a red crab appearing in front of him shouting out, "Fuck your father! Fuck your father!" before quickly scurrying away. The figure turns around and starts yelling towards masked clones.
"Alright, which one of you waste of neurons let that crab back in here!? He's not even a meme!!
*Static takes over the screen once more.*
8085938 Ah. Missed that,
8085996 Don't forget, that option might not be on the table. In addition a new attack or ability could create new avenues of attack.
We'll have to wait and see.
The mist rolls back revealing a blue dragon admits a crowd of passed out dragon.
"8085996, 8086023 what you both are saying is very true. While I don't hesitate to get physical, Fluorspar has shown be that avoiding fights, and playing smart can be a better victory than beating up a guy. I'm assuming that we are going to get the options next chapter, I agree with the increase in intelligence, but I want to spend 1 CP on strength so we can continue to corrupting appleJack. Eros explained that he will need to be stronger if we wanted to continue to corrupt her.
Anyway, we won't know what to do until we see the options. Until then lets just think of possible plans to use in the fight.
Now to get clean from all of these fluids." FImbulwinter guestures to the bodily fluids covering many parts of his body.
The mist rolls in as the blue dragon heads out of the orgy room.
8086631 This maybe true, but the sad fact is not all fights are avoidable. Especially if you... go against the grain like we are. I'm not saying we shouldn't play smart, but I am saying we need to prepare in case words are not enough.
The mist rolls back to see a huge blue dragon with silver chest scales, sprawling out in a steamy pool of water.
"8086658, trust me. I understand that some fights are unavoidable. For example with Merry, due to his high magic proweress, and heavy denial, I couldn't just corrupt him, I had to restrain him until I could break through the barriers in his mind. But, I didn't just walk in there and restrain him. I first made a few magic absorbing crystals, and then confronted him while he sleeps. It may have seem cowardly, but I played smart and now he truly is free..... and probably has abused that tree many times over tonight. I have to talk to Zircon soon.....
Anyway, I'm just saying we should keep the confrontations as limited as possible. At least we have Mac to help us this time, but if only have Birdhoof to help Zelix against a stronger stallion like Bulk Biceps or even AppleJack we are in serious trouble without a plan.
The mist rolls back in as the dragon lord stretches out further into the water, so only his head isn't submerged in the hot spring's embrace.
Big Mac has it out for Zecora. He is running on rage, and likely very determined to get revenge. Could it be possible to somehow armor him in alchemy? A stone skin potion or the like? Because, combine that with his natural strength and rage, and voila! An excellent tank and distraction. Let him soak up Zecora's first attacks as you come in from the side. And (once again) when all else fails, a poison dagger to the back will end the fight.
The translucent being can be seen writing on some paper before tuning to you and speaking.
“Wow that dragon was actually right about the colors, I’m impressed.”
“Now onto the questions, “
“This may be unnecessary to ask but just to clarify, is necromancy illegal and if it is how is it illegal? Is it when used a ticket straight to jail or the every sane reaction of an immediate execution?”
“Is our corruption like chaos corruption, in the way that it causes mutations over time?”
“Will the type of event change if we don’t attend to it and something in the same aria comes up again? As an example to clarify the question, will an event in friendship castle change from green to purple if not attended to or will those be of the green variant every time?”
“Why didn’t we get one of those law books the day we arrived like Thunderlane did?”
"Is there a black market or something that fills the demand for sex products and prostetution?"
“That is all I wish to know for now that hasn’t been asked by others yet. Now to start planning for the fight with Zecora.” The being turn back to what he was doing and starts writing again as your vision turns to black.
A figure dressed in pants and a hoodie places a book back on the shelf before sitting back down. Before it lies a book. The false cover on the front says "Plans to save the world". Opening it, the creature dips its quill into the inkwell and puts it to the paper.
"Well, this is most interesting. Someone seeking our input and advice as opposed to putting on a show? You've caught our attention."
It pauses for a moment before continuing writing.
"We will certainly continue watching as your avatar has made plenty of progress in such a short amount of time. Well done with the creation of such a creature. We'll have to take a look at that spell sometime. It'd be very... useful."
The creature reaches back and grabs a small bowl and begins to eat from it.
"Suffice to say that we are impressed... but that doesn't mean aid. We do not wish for these communications to lead others to us. The Idaals have already found us, and it's been difficult to deal with them already. However, if you succeed, maybe some of them will both you and not us. We cannot wait for the next steps, 'Lord' Eros."
Before the book can be closed, a light glints off of the contents of the bowl, revealing a pink, wrinkly ball.
**Edited 4/12/17**
What plans do you have for the Princesses once your glorious corruption has spread across Equestria?
What of the element bearers and their rainbow power? Do you have use for such a power with the bearers corrupted and twisted to your purpose, or is the power to risky to attempt to use?
Do you believe Discord can become an ally or will he need to bee dealt with? Now that he has 'reformed' and seeks friendship, he will control his wanton chaos. If he could be shown that your corruption will not stop his friendship with Fluttershy, then I believe he may be swayed under the right conditions.
8090421 I' glad to see a new commentor, but this next chapter is us talking to Eros, not the fight chapter. So repost this after the chapter with Eros has been published. That way, we can compare what to do.
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*Deep breath* *Facepalm*
My apologies. Thanks for the heads up. I'll be in the corner... mentally smacking myself.
8091670 **Slides over a drink as a welcoming gift**
The mist rolls back and a blue dragon smiles back.
"8091670, give yourself a break. We all make mistakes. I just told everyone one of mine. Don't. Eat yourself up. At least you got the majority of your comment figured out for the next chapter. Also if you want to ask a question directly to Eros, now is the time."
The mist closes in as the dragon waves a claw.
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Gracias.
8091683
"Will do. I've just edited my old main post (to fit the next chapter better)."
Within the cavern of the Ancient One resonates a new sound, the thrum of a gong...
As its tone fades and echoes about the caves the Ancient One looks within the palace of Eros once-more in the lakes surface.
"Ah the new resonator is far more powerful communication relay" they say with gusto as they look to Eros. "I could go on about how difficult it was to find a competent bard with the proper song-weaving powers but time is of the essence." They state in a grave tone. "I will ask a few questions then be out of your possibly magnificent way; 1st, your avatar seems to have conveyed a new capability (the red and black energy he conveyed while converting the orange slave) is this a possibility of him gaining a use of magic that may equal or even surpass your own?"
The A.O. pauses in realization replying. "Not to mean offence, but that does bring me to my 2nd question; When it is all said and done and when he possibly succeeds how will you reveal yourself to him, if you ever will at all?" They pause then begin to chuckle. " My last question is about you; I know your powers and skill make any you screw into a crumbled sub-servant mess, but what is the power you hold over the mind itself?" The Ancient One take notice of Eros' cocked eyebrow and replies accordingly. "I know your powers must be at least on par with Discords but will Zexis' skill ever reach yours or his level?"
The moonlight begins to shine within the cavern but fades into dimness... And then The Ancient One starts guffawing as if told a joke beyond logic. " I...*wheeze* I'm...Sorry...but *gasp* your plans seem to also be going well and soon mine will come to fruition... Ah to be called upon once more...I hope if you need any of my power, Don't hesitate to ask..."
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It is one thing to corrupt the characters and another to make them cry. do not ruin the character!
PS: you could have got Scoot without drugs