• Member Since 24th Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen Jul 4th, 2014

Shadow Aqua


I am just a brony planning on writing a fanfic right now.

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Cobalt Aqua a seven-teen year old pegasus has just moved to Ponyville to start a new life as a weather pony, there he will meet friends face challenges and maybe even find love? Starting anew isn't something easy to do and you tend to make a lot of mistakes along the way, that however is how find out who we truly are.

This is my first fanfic so I don't think it's gonna work too well but I do feel that I should try.

Dark will come at a much later part if it is liked enough for me to keep writing it.

Cover Art by shinjiiuchiha, here is the link to her DA http://shinjiiuchiha.deviantart.com/

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 11 )

awsome stories keep up the good work. note:trust me when i say some people will dislike for no good reason.

945079 Thanks that means a lot to me. :twilightsmile:
Right now I am working to make the third chapter more entertaining.

Alright I fixed some errors that I saw, if there are any that I missed please point them out to me.

then hurry up. finish the new one already!

Lol poor pony he hates clouds and he lives next to Dashie :facehoof:

Take it easy on him, hes working as hard as can.

now we just need to correct your spelling and grammar, and definitely balance out your chapters. it has good flow, but you need to watch your tenses as well as your nouns.

send me your next chapter before posting, i can spell and basic gammar check for you.

You know, I have always enjoyed where this story might go in regards to Dash, but I wonder what comes next. The very fact of it makes me feel :pinkiecrazy: at times. And, change your editor he/she is not doing you justice.

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