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What Did I Do?

It was just a normal day.
Things weren't supposed to turn out like this.
At the end of it all I can think is, What did I do?

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NaiadSagaIotaOar #1 · Sep 9th, 2016 · · ·

Not a single comment? That's just unfair.

This was a pretty good story. My biggest complaint is that Heart Mender felt a little bit too clueless. It sounds like that time he save Roseluck really had a big impact on him, so it's a little weird that he forgot about it completely until Rarity pretty much spelled it out for him. The payoff in the end was really good, though.