"And, burned because I beauty loved,
I shall not know the highest bliss,
And give my name to the abyss
Which waits to claim me as its own.”
― Charles Baudelaire
An average Canterlot High student live his life in perfect bliss...
...Until the day she appeared.
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Will there be a sequel?
I don't know yet. Maybe if it gets enough popularity I'll make an actual story instead of straight exposition lol XD
Eh it was okay for a first fanfic but it needs a little more dimension you know. Like having the OC explain what his life is (don't get me wrong it's cool that you gave your Character depth) tell if how he notice Sunset instead of the old "she's a goddess and I'm not worthy of being in her presence". Maybe if you do a sequel then you can say how the two if them met or how sunset saved the character from something or via versa. But all and all it is a good first fanfic and I give it a favorite and thumbs up.