Well, well, a sequel to "the grey factor".

I won't lie to you that you treat on thin ice: There are ethical problems with the whole clone-program-thing and I wasn't too thrilled about how Japko ended his story. I'd love to see a solution to it all, yet I have absolutely no idea how one would even start with that.

So, surprise me.

>>809752809752

Well, I'm glad you've read the previous story. That does make this a little easier to understand.

I, too, found the ethical dilemma of clone soldiers very interesting. I think my opinion differs on that topic, both to you and to Japko. They have their place in this story. I don't necessarily have that place determined yet, but... they will.

Incidentally, have you read his new story, Mirroring Skies? I'm thinking it's gonna be really interesting, especially once he really starts buckling into the plot. Hate to be a shill, but I consider him a good friend of mine, so... check it out.

Twilight's, wait what? When? Who?

Brain.exe has crashed

whew kinda hard to follow for me but its pulled me in.

Dam if the princesse's did what he thinks they did ,shit twilight gonna have one nasty letter to send.Nice going on the storie cant wait to see more.

This does not bode well for the princesses.

But I wonder if Celestia and Luna would risk their precious genetic experiment and force Twilight into this. Celestia at least knows how unstable Twilight gets under pressure and that this might even put Twilight's and foal's life at risk e.g. in a "Lesson Zero" scenario.

Yeah, I myself too wonder whether it really was them or something rather strange happened - as she said, maybe there's some sort of a repressed memory... Or she just did one experiment which (as usual) just went wrong.

Either way, can't wait to see how the rest of this story will evolve!

I feel  guilty about putting off reading this story for so long, I loved what you've written so far, both Grey Factor and A call to Vespers. Keep up the good work.

>>963048963048

While I do appreciate that you enjoy A Call to Vespers, I did not write The Grey Factor, Japko did; I merely proofread it.

>>963160963160

NOOOOO!!! My entire life has been a lie, what else haven't you told me

>>963406963406

You're adopted, Santa Claus isn't real, and some fat-free food actually has fat in it.

I knew about the first two but that last one, HOLY COW! Everything in my life has taken on new meaning, I don't know if I can handle it.

cant wait for the next chapter when is it? good chapters so far

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1fyzD4S2Cy4

>>967729967729

I happen to do a lot of other stuff in my spare time, so... eventually. I get distracted, I get in a rut, I write other stories instead... eventually.

I'm intrigued. Please continue ASAP

... *prods story*

>>19022451902245

I swear, I've been trying. As soon as I can figure out how to get Jade and Twilight onto a train, I'll get the next, like, four chapters up!

Considering the whole chapter is about confronting the subject at the source..you could go with "Confrontation"..but "Trust" would work too..but yeah I agree. Get rid of "Shame"

And a chapter where we are in the real world and not split reality dreamland

I myself liked this one, and great to know that this story still lives! But yeah, due to shame being there in pretty much only one sentence, I do think too that chapter name change is in order. Trust sounds good

Oh good, this one isn't dead!!

So, Celly isn't to blame?? They got drunk, didn't they? And surely there is some form of test to see if Twilight has had sex, either with or without her consent?

Also interesting that the guards are aware of how they came about.