Being an Alicorn, an immortal Goddess, isn't a curse. It is, in fact, a blessing. Now Twilight has gained her first worshipper in the form of her friend Applejack. The relationship between a goddess and disciple is an intense and interesting ordeal
This sounds interesting and with a interesting little bent that I haven't seen but then again I'm not really into godhood stuff since all I can come up with right off the bat is that greek "stuff"! I have to intentionally think of god(s) that are at least reasonably worth while, greek is so much a "see a god, walk away and never look back"
God and Goddesses really shouldn't be capitalized, going off of real world conventions. 'God' has implications of (Judeo/ChristianIslamic) monotheism that aren't really appropriate here. But that's ultimately a stylistic choice on your part.
7487204 I agree with you. Given all her friends call her AJ/Applejack, perhaps Twi calling her Jacqueline is a desire for increased intimacy between them. AJ certainly does not seem to mind!
7487292 Indeed. Thus far avoiding the clichés these fics fall into. I'm adicted to Twi fics with this sort of premise so I'm always for something new and more nuanced.
This is a rather interesting concept. I don't think anyone's ever approached alicorn godhood like this. The interactions between the characters is really sweet and I can see a lot of interesting things done with this premise. You have my interest.
Even if not sexually, I hope Spike plays a substantial role in this story. One would think he'd also be on the list of worshipers.
I do hope that you return to this project soon it seems that it could be an exciting new take on alicorns are gods trope where you actually explore how that would effect their relationships and emotional attachments to one another. While writing some excellent Dom/Sub clop.
Will there be other pairings in this story that involve Twilight with other mares other than with Applejack? Also, her second follower should be Trixie.
This sounds interesting and with a interesting little bent that I haven't seen but then again I'm not really into godhood stuff since all I can come up with right off the bat is that greek "stuff"! I have to intentionally think of god(s) that are at least reasonably worth while, greek is so much a "see a god, walk away and never look back"
God and Goddesses really shouldn't be capitalized, going off of real world conventions. 'God' has implications of (Judeo/ChristianIslamic) monotheism that aren't really appropriate here. But that's ultimately a stylistic choice on your part.
Eh, mane6 alicorn-only harem is best. They'll get there I'm sure :3
Question. What is Chrysalis in this world?
Well now...
I'll let Mr. Harry S. Robins (Voice actor of Dr. Kleiner from Half-Life and Tinker from Dota 2) explain how I feel right now.
Yay! More please!
Enjoying this.
Twilight calling AJ "Jacqueline" I find a bit disconcerting, don't know why.
Perhaps it's a goddess thing?
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Jacqueline is often a girl name that is shortened to Jacie or Jack. This might be the author embellishing thing for effect.
7487204 I agree with you.
Given all her friends call her AJ/Applejack, perhaps Twi calling her Jacqueline is a desire for increased intimacy between them. AJ certainly does not seem to mind!
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True true. Either way this is a great setup. Don't you think so?
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Indeed.
Thus far avoiding the clichés these fics fall into. I'm adicted to Twi fics with this sort of premise so I'm always for something new and more nuanced.
More please.
We need more of this, I eagerly await.
Awesome intro, nice work.
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7487204 then should she really be calling her AppleJacqueline?
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Her name in this fic is Jaqueline Apple, with Applejack as the nickname she normally goes by.
7529000 I've been trying to find stories like this for ages! finally i found one, I can't wait for the next chapter.
I'd like to see more of this
update?
This is a rather interesting concept. I don't think anyone's ever approached alicorn godhood like this. The interactions between the characters is really sweet and I can see a lot of interesting things done with this premise. You have my interest.
Even if not sexually, I hope Spike plays a substantial role in this story. One would think he'd also be on the list of worshipers.
Update?
will there be more of this?
Is there going to be anymore chapters? I only ask because this seemed like a interesting story.
I do hope that you return to this project soon it seems that it could be an exciting new take on alicorns are gods trope where you actually explore how that would effect their relationships and emotional attachments to one another. While writing some excellent Dom/Sub clop.
Fascinating concept. I would love to see what their friends say when they find out.
Will there be other pairings in this story that involve Twilight with other mares other than with Applejack? Also, her second follower should be Trixie.